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dreadbaron


I am a fan of MLP:FiM, and have decided to write my own stories based on the show. Most of my stories will deal with OC ponies, but I will include as many canon characters and themes as I can.

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Twilight Sparkle notices a disturbance at the Summer Sun Celebration, and sets out to discover what it is. Unknown to her, Disney villains have developed the ability to journey from Disney Earth to Equestria; and intend to command and conquer everything they see.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 11 )

Good job! I really like it!:raritywink::pinkiehappy:

Save for Clayton, the shadow man, dr doof ,and that bag of bugs you are pulling out some obscure badies. I mean that I was expecting the villians from kingdom hearts 1 but you managed to impress me by forcing me to Google two of you characters. Also faved

Is Doof good or evil here? And rico not clayton intresting. And I got a feeling that the The Queen (snow white), Maleficent(sleeping beauty), Chernabog (night on blad mountain), or Pete(many) is the that is in charge for real.

Doof is a good guy for this story, even though
he considers himself to be evil. As far as there
being another boss behind this goes, for now
I'll just say there's a reason why I'm using obscure
villains right now.

Intrestresting you included candlejack wait does he come when its a typ

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I think Candlejack does come regardless, and I hope you liked Quackerjack's rol...

The Rescuers no? or that little yappy dog? or the Great Mouse Detective?

Nice chapter but it feels like I missed some thing.

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There was some editing done to this chapter, originally I had written it as a longer parody of the scenes in Nightmare Before Christmas between Oogie Boogie and Santa as well as a full on invasion of Ponyville. I felt it went on for too long, so I cut it down by nearly half without taking out anything essential to the story.

Why just the pathetic villains? I was hoping for Scar, Jafar and other more Evil villains

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the other O.W.C.A. agents fool.

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