Looking for general feedback on the Galeforce series · 4:53am May 23rd, 2012

I'm curious to know, now that I have completed two stories and am working on the third: what do you think of them as a reader?

Some questions I would like to ask:

I realize that my story is definitely not fanfic in the traditional sense (only two of the Mane 6 have made an appearance, as well as the Cutie Mark Crusaders), but does it still seem like a FiM-worthy story?

Is the story too violent for your tastes, or not violent enough for it's "Dark" rating?

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