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Dark Nightshade
I like to do occasional crossoves, and I can now draw. Just PM me if you want me to draw or wright something! I'm on Wattpad, check me out: https://www.wattpad.com/user/Dark-Nightshade
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Ooooohhh cant wait for the next one!
7704183 Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
The name's Bill Cipher, and I do not approve of this story!
... I don't like this. I don't like how she randomly found the book, I also don't like Bill being more powerful than Discord. Bill has done some crazy stuff (annihilating the time baby for one.) But the reason Discord never did anything of this scale is because he isn't that evil. (Although he did casually lift the sun and moon every minute... which would actually require more strength than killing time baby did.) But, you can fix both these problems with one simple change: Discord should be lying about not being able to see Bill. He should also be the one who put the book there in the first place. and all he wants is to see all the beautiful chaos from the encounter. (It doesn't explicitly say that he's less powerful than Bill, but rather that he just can't be bothered interfering, and it's certainly more in character than just rolling over and dying like he did here. It also makes him seem more cunning and manipulative, as well as giving the plot some complexity. You could even have the story narrated by Discord, which would make it more interesting overall.) All in all, great idea. I will favourite this, and remember: I'M WATCHING YOU
7704502 You may not approve of it, but do you like it?
7704573 Wow, that's....actually an idea I was toying with. I didn't expect someone to actually suggest that, so PLOT TWIS!
7705045 ... If you do that, I can guarantee I will unconditionally love this story.
7705878 Good, because that idea is a good idea.
I believe it's I am not I have.
Why is it harder for him to stay hidden at night? I demand a logical explanation, by the definition of hidden it should be easier while it's dark and ponies brains are too tired to properly process what they're seeing!
7721949 Oh, dang it, my bad.
7721956 He is a giant, floating, glowing Dorito with an eye. While I will admit, it is true that ponies are tired at the end of the day, and what you said is true, it is also true for Bill. Either way, do you like it?
7721987 Cipher is my favorite character from Gravity Falls, of course I like! You depicted him pretty well I must say.
7722031 Thanks! I haven't seen any of the episodes in a while, so thanks!
>"I am a being of pure energy with no weaknesses!" . Bill Cipher
>Trying to say he gets tired
>Sounds legit
but seriously though... this was ok. Just ok. It was really too short for me to give you a detailed analysis. so... yeah.
-INFUSCATE-
7726537 Ok, but you liked it, right? To each their own?
7726594 Au contraire! I adore it! (seriously I've been waiting for something like this for years.) But the chapter was just far too short.
7726762 Ah, that's good.
Bill: THIS IS TOOOTALLY OOC FOR ME Y'KNOW? DO YOU EVEN KNOW ME BRUH??!?!
7816598 Did you like it, though?
7816753
Me: I'll give it an 8/10
Bill: OH HELL NO F*** YOU AND YOUR INCAPABLE IMAGINATION!!!!
Also Bill can't mess with the waking world unless he's using a host body Edit: or with his physical form
And he can't communicate with people(ponies) unless they are in the dream state.
7818576 Really? Honestly, I can't remember much about the few episodes with him in it. And as for the imagination thing, I have a great one, but I can't get it out well.
7819159 Actually, those points were made by the show itself, like the one when dipper became bipper, Ford explaining to dip who and/or what Bill is ;a dream demon
7819373 What points? The dream demon thing?
7822886 Yes and all else that I've said
I feel like this has potential. It just needs to go in the right direction