How Rarity Investigates Should Have Ended

Sometimes stories need a change. Or in this case multiple ones. In the style of the HISHE videos on YouTube, let's see how this could've ended better!

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veronicatoon7

veronicatoon7 #1 · Oct 31st, 2016 · · ·

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I made one for the Crystal Empire already that's up if you want to see it. As for your request, I'm in the midst of considering what to do next.

NobodieZ

NobodieZ #2 · Dec 21st, 2016 · · ·

Excellent work on this! And I agree with
7684092 You should do more of these if you have the time.

Frankie2

Frankie2 #3 · Jan 4th, 2017 · · ·

"Well miss, I'm sorry to say this but I'm afraid you're going to have to wait until tomorrow at the soonest. I can't let you tamper with the mail and, like I said, I have a full load of deliveries today, so, well, um," he stuttered, "I have to be going. Hope you get your package soon.
And with that he walked out the door and wheeled off with his load, leaving behind a very stunned Rarity and very impressed Sassy.

"Wait? Where were you keeping that dress trunk all this time? And just how did you change out of that dress and into that one so quickly,"

After all, wasn't it you who broke several Wonderbolt Academy records in one day?

Actually, she had help.
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"If you're trying to prove Rainbow Dash as a mare of her word and worthy enough to join your ranks then you are doing it in the most revolting method I have ever seen. Rainbow Dash here has more integrity, truthfulness and loyalty then any other pony I've seen, much more then I've seen from any of you. Heaven's sake, she's the Element bearer of Loyalty, that alone should be enough for you to believe her. You are all just acting like a bunch of immature, idiotic foals. Even thinking that your culprit could be her sickens me. Are you really so stupid to just accuse her like that without properly investigating her or anyone else who could've been involved with this?"

"Thank you Rainbow Dash for alerting me of the inefficiency of my guard. I will see to it that they are dismissed. I will also speak with the Wonderbolts and declare your innocence."

Yeah, contacting Celestia might have got Rainbow Dash pardoned, maybe re-instated but could not prevented Rainbow's lifetime ban from the Wonderbolts.

I know there is more I can do, but I'm tired. Have a fav.

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