Didn't have any time to edit this chapter, so if you notice any grammar or punctuation errors please note them below. So without further ado, please enjoy the story.

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TL:DR Love and Tolerate

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I really think it should be "Kill and burn"
Makes so much more sense, you know?

Anyway, I liked the story, even if other people didn't. It made me laugh, so I don't care what anyone else says, I think it's good.

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Makes more sense, but it doesn't really have a ring to it. Something like Smash and burn sounds a little better.

Oh, so I presume that this account is either your main or an alt, but back to the question. It's just an opinion, but I believe morality is simply just another device to constrain progress and creativity.

1219110 I don't see the reason for all the hate on this story. It's funny and gory too. Why must people cling to their precious "morality"? I think it's pathetic really. They're only trying to hide the fact that they secretly enjoyed it too.

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Either way it's a win win. I get to write in the genre I feel most comfortable with and probably get a few pointers to help improve my writing. Also, the dislikes aren't really that bad; it shows at least the reader took the time to rate. Though it does kind of suck that no one really leaves a reason.

We need more people like you on this site.