• Published 28th Jun 2012
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Layers - AWOL



Twilight is studying more into the Elements of Harmony, and Pinkie Pie is first to help her.

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Comments ( 7 )

857885

I appreciate your sarcasm. Honestly, I wrote it this way because I feel that realistically none of them would disapprove of their relationship. One might be confused, but I couldn't see anypony disapproving.:twilightsheepish:

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I appreciate your input. I'm actually genuinely surprised you're the first one to mention that. It's kinda hard to right something like that, you know? Eh, it's just my mediocre style, I guess. I'm still trying to improve. :twilightblush:

Yay update.
Clonetrooper pretty much summed up my thoughts on this.

857885 you. You are everywhere I go. Almost half of the stories I've read, I've seen you. Therefore, I plan to say hi to you every time I see you commenting, no matter how old the comment. For giggles, mostly...
To pensive Brony: how did I not notice this having a new chapter out? *snatches new chapter and drags it into the cave to be devoured*

883389 I know right? It's like we all read the same stories or something. :rainbowlaugh:

Another great chapter, kudos on not making AJ be a grumpy pants over this. :pinkiehappy:

I love it so far, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Very good, although it felt a little rushed starting off, but that's quite common in clop as far as I've noticed. You more than made up for it anyway, so good job... I liked how you didn't make Pinkie into a completely different person underneath, like some of the fics featuring angsty!Pinkie. I'd give it 8/10 :moustache: 'staches for clopping brilliance :pinkiesmile:

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