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TwinkieSpy


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So this just happened. Where do I go from here? :pinkiecrazy:

But in all honesty, I'm actually quite proud of this story. Not only is it about my OTP, I also think it's written quite well. Of course, that could just be my ego talking, so I implore you to critique this the best you can. Thank you!

-TwinkieSpy

Sounds great. Sex ok I guess not a big fan of pony on pony. I'll still read though.

"I can't wait to see the look on Twilight's face!"
^this, SO MUCH this.

I never thought I'd see PinkiexPinkie. That's... That's a new one. And now to read.

Edit: Well that was good. In a really strange way. As for where to go with it, well... "I can't wait to see the look on Twilight's face!" might be somewhere interesting to take this.

#6 · Mar 15th, 2012 · · ·

Grrrr my comment didn't post. Any way I said its a great story and I'm glad you stayed away from the clopfic. You should continue with this and show how the relation ship gos. As long as it stays away from being a clopfic. Great story though.

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:pinkiesad2: :heart: :pinkiegasp:

God help us all.

Wow... that's... original (and good).

Would've loved to see this continued, but a one shot is still good :rainbowwild:

I welcome our new doppelganger overlords. Please, grace my eyeballs with more of this.

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Well, I wrote a oneshot with the same pairing awhile back, but at the moment I desperately need to update my chaptered stories. :facehoof:

If Pinkie was my overlord life would be awesome.

Reminds me when I wrote Sp/it. Similar concept but with both Pinkie Pies teaming up on Dash. Good job on it mate. Can't wait to see more?

So good and I am not into clop or the like.
I just don't know what to say only if you write more I will read :pinkiehappy:

Good God, this is great! I almost didn't read for trepidation of the dreaded sex tag, but I'm pleased as punch to say I thought the scene was tastefully done, if a bit abrupt.

The whole concept is so deliciously bizzare, and their relationship is oh so sweet regardless. I can't get enough.

Noticed a typo, a "that that" where "than that" was meant.

Anyway, keep up the good work!

I don't normally go for clopfics unless there's sufficient praise for the non-graphic parts of them. Basically, I'm reading because I want a story to entertain me, and paragraphs of nothing but sex don't make a good fanfic. But this was one hell of a premise and one hell of a story, and I didn't even realize there was anything graphic in it until I saw the Mature rating and the comments beforehand, so that's another excellent sign. The thumb-up and favorite are well-earned.

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Whoops, thanks for the correction.

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More than happy to help.

:pinkiesad2: Beautiful. I pretty much skimmed over the sex scene. The exploration of Pinkie's mind was a lot more interesting. This is a beautiful crack pairing and a very sweet portrayal thereof. Excellent work.:pinkiehappy:

This story gave me so many feels. You have no idea... I loved it so much

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325586
> So this just happened.
That was my reaction.

I had to laugh at the sex, but the whole setup was great. I honestly would love to see a sequel to this.

That was actually really cute. I demand moar :pinkiegasp: :heart: :pinkiecrazy:

The sex was rushed. The way you wrote it, Pinkamena climaxed in a minute.

Other than that, very well done. 3/5.

if seen pinkie x pinkie, pinkie x bubbles, but pinkie x pinkamine i could not find and yet here it is now the next for me to find is a pinkamina x pinkamina

I'd always taken a strange liking to Pinkie X Pinkamena, I considered writing some just because I'd never seen it before. This was well written, kudos! :heart:

Now I would like to see where this concept could go when pinkamena starts her new life. :pinkiecrazy:

As when I read your other PinkieXPinkamena story, I am just stricken with how sweet it is, it's dysfunctional, in a way, but oh so romantic!
It's a very feel-good story, the sex-scene was uncomplicated and calm, it didn't break the flow or suddenly go into unexplained details.
I wouldn't call it cloppy, but I would call it sweet. Good job! Yet again you made me like the idea of Pinkie x Pinkamena so very much.

I would honestly love to see this continued, it certainly stands up on its own, but there is A LOT you could do with this set up.

:pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

:yay: yay

Oh god what have you done?!
TWO PINKIES?!
Erm...maybe not really. One is more or less normal if a bit depressed, and the other one is well...
Pinkie.
I liked it, but the scene could have been longer and more descriptive.

I DEMAND MORE!! This totally needs a sequal about how ponyville will react to two, yet so different Pinkies and their relationship!

...I am now a big Pinkie x Pinkamena fan. Dammit. o_o Nice story XD

DANG IT! I'm so conflicted! I don't like most stories with sex in it, but this was good... Not because of what it had in it, but because of how it was... Curse u!!!:pinkiehappy:

This story gives a whole new meaning to the phrase "go buck yourself", doesn't it? :raritywink:

Love it! :pinkiesmile::heart::pinkiecrazy:

Keep up the good work!

325586 Do think you make a follow up of everypony meeting Pinkie's former alter ego.
Pretty sure the cakes and her friends have something to say about it. And yay, Pound and Pumpkin have two 'auntie's' now!

Not the first pinkieXpinkamina Ive read but its a good concept and an interesting story. Thank you

First of all, I would like to say that I enjoyed reading this story.

Secondly, I would like to know, if possible, how the Element of Laughter works now. Since Pinkie and Pinkamena were the same pony when they received the Element, I would assume that they could either both use it or it would split into two parts, one for Pinkie and one for Pinkamena.

I thank you for showing a pinkamena not serial killer,is so rare.

nice story, very sweet, during the sex scenes, which I usually do not like, I came out a tear almost,very sweet.
pinkiexpinkamena = love for ever

This is one of the best stories I've read, and I don't say that lightly.
The clop, while thrown in very loosely, does serve the narrative well, but the story outside the clop is the true gem, a story of introspection being extrospection, with emotional highs and lows, all told in a mere 4000 words, beautiful doesn't begin to describe it.
This is the first story with a mature rating to make it into my favorites list, and I believe it has deserved its place.

Honestly, I liked the beginning if it. I really thought it would go somewhere deeper. I don't 100% know why Pinkie hates how she looks, and I don't 100% know why Pinkie is in love with Pinkamena, or why they decided to have sex in the front door of SugarCube Corner...if I'm reading it correctly. I also don't really know what's going to happen to the two of them, or if Pinkamena will need to go back inside Pinkie's body....

Nice read though. :pinkiehappy::heart::pinkiesad2:

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