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HylianWolfMage553


in all my years of living, I never thought I'd become a brony, let alone write fanfictions. but here I am.

Comments ( 43 )

7666693

Was it over when the Germans bombed Pearl Harbour?

7666832

You said that males don't go into heat.

I don't think it matters to this guy.

7666838 Actually, there's a male heat. But it's called Rut.
The more you know ! ~

7666938 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rut_(mammalian_reproduction)

Really ? :trixieshiftright:

You know, 'furfag stuff' is inspired from real things most of the time. Exaggerated, in an unrealistic way, but still real.
Of course, bunnies aren't supposed to have a Rut Period, but heh, not nitpicky.

7666955 Anybody can edit wikipedia, it's not a source.
And unfortunately, I am nitpicky.

7666693 7666921

Rabbits don't go into heat. At all. They don't have ovulation cycles - it's why they're so good at breeding. Copulation induces ovulation, so the egg cells are actually released about 12 hours after mating and are pretty much instantly fertilised.

So. :trixieshiftright:

7666971 Either way, like I said. Premise for the story is dumb.

7666975

Yeah, and it should probablly be tagged M rather than T, too.

7666962
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/rut
https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/rut
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/rut
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/rut
http://www.macmillandictionary.com/dictionary/british/rut

Enough sources ? Not always the first definition, but it's always there. If you want, i can give your sources IN FRENCH, Rut is also used in french, specifically for the male equivalent of heat.

When dozen of sites gives the same definitions, i thiiiiink there's something going on, no ?

At least, you're right on one thing, male bunnies don't go into rut. But it's a story, and for the sake of comedy, i think that the author can take a few liberties, no ?

7666987 Okay, i'm stopping now. You have your opinion, i have mine...

And well, 7666971 does have a point.

So, let's stop this debate, and agree to disagree ?

7666997 Except there's a difference between opinion and fact.
The fact of the matter is you're wrong.

7666997 Except there's a difference between opinion and fact.
The fact of the matter is you're wrong.

im... surprised if not speechless. I'didn't think some one could make angel likeable and it actually feels genuine so i have one thing for you sir

7667000 CAN YOU SUT UP YOU WHINEY BITCH IT DOSEN'T MATTER ITS A STORY IT DOESN'T HAVE TO FALOOW THE RUP]LES OF NATURE HERE SINCE THEY ARE OBVIOUSLY DIFFERENT FROM THE ONES THERE DIP SHIT

7667566 Can you please stop fighting with others in the comments? I didn't know male bunnies don't go into heat in our world until your brought it up but I can take a few liberties in a story taking place in a fantasy world right? You are only presenting a negative image of yourself that will haunt you and might end up hurting your future in the long run. I just decided to write a story where Angel was a likeable and fleshed out character and I wanted to write a believable love story for him and Winona. Just so happened I got one minor detail about male bunnies wrong. But that shouldn't ruin your enjoyment of the story in my eyes. I hope you are move civil in the future.

7667657 Welcome to FiMFiction my friend :raritywink: btw your story is pretty good have a like and a follow :rainbowwild:

7667000 Rut and Must (happens to male elephants) are real things. Your ignorance doesn't matter. Have a nice day as you scream and cry against fact. :D

7666975

Yeah, you're right, the premise is soooo wrong.
Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to go outside to feed my magical talking ponies. The flying ones are really a pain to catch. Since some of them are considered sentient, I am forbidden to put them in a cage.

7671224 defeating her argument with humor. Brilliant calling out of how her augment is invalid since it takes place in a fantasy world.

7667697 This story takes place in a world with magical talking ponies where dragons, griffins, alicorns, manticores, sea serpents, and sirens exist. That is not even counting the IDW comic series which reveals several more creatures exist. Not to mention Discord is a being that can defy physics and logic with a snap of his fingers. So your augment that Angel shouldn't be in heat because "It doesn't happen in real life" goes right out the window. I may or may not got one thing wrong about bunnies though I might add that without that plot point the whole story falls apart. I hoped people would enjoy the story regardless. Btw what give you the right to say whether or not a story has a good or bad premise? In my eyes it's not the premise itself that makes or breaks a story it's the execution of the premise. And from the praise I received I know I made a fine story out of what you call a "bad premise". And from what they said it isn't blind praise either. But I want one question answered. Why? Why are you making this into a big deal? You could've walked away after the first comment and left it at that but no, you had to get the last word in, you had to force an irrelevant fact down everyone's throats and not back away when I asked you nicely. Why?

Comment posted by HHHGREGG deleted Oct 27th, 2016

This needs an editor more badly than that story with 500k words posted a few years ago. :raritydespair:
(I'd offer but I have life-related things to do.)

7674969 Thanks for giving me constructive criticism. It's nice to know that someone can say something is flawed but do so in a humorous fashion. I'll try my best to improve my skills and take your words to heart.

Comment posted by Pinkie Pie is Dumb deleted Oct 29th, 2016

Luckily unlike her mother Winona survived the birth of her children because they were so goddamn tiny.

This ended up being really sweet and cute.

This was a beautifully sweet and heart warming and a little sad ending.

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