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^Just click the name ;) I write because I enjoy doing so! Rainbow Dash is of course my favourite, if you hadn't gathered from my stories! Remember, Pegasi First!
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I haven't read the first one yet. But this sounds good and interesting. Just hope it end well.
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Thank you
As the author I'm obviously going to tel you to read the prequel! Honestly though it is quite relevant, but you may be able to get by
7621855 yeah, sure, I'm gonna read it as soon as I finish the story that I'm reading currently.
7622804
Great
The sequel is already here!!!!! Let's see how all will go from now!
Things will be really hard for Dash from now on, and Twilight is taking a big risk housing her...
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Yep, wanted to get it underway straight away!
Well, the waited meeting with the rest of the Elements went almost as I was expecting... Just with less Pinkie Pie action.
But Dash has something in her mind, and that will cause some problems.
Yeah, she's tooooo dramatic, but I like it.
Nah you were just in the wrong at the wrong time. I'm very sure that Twilight's gonna be so disappointed in her.
Aaaaand, that's how things start to go south! Welp, let's go to prepare some graves, they'll be needed soon enough...
Dun dun duuuuun!!!!
Poor AJ, she was really hoping that tortuting Dash could bring some satisfaction to her?! After torture was what made Dash the way she is now? Yeah, it couldn't work...
Genius Spitfire! Give to the crazy psychopath weapons and soldiers! That'll end very well!
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Oh man, I really want to see dash obtain some form of redemption. Very intriguing story for me so far. Keep it up!
God damnit.
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Hehe it's not over yet
Much death awaits. I'm pretty sure of it.
I see so much backstabbing in the future, that my own back is hurting!
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Backstabbing? In the Pegasi First stories?
The story is going for the classics: a public speech, in open view...
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Aha would you believe me if I told you I hadn't thought of that?
7641873 I would, if you didn't already used so many political and overthrowing clichés...
7641946
Oh, such as?
7642038 Well... Like how Spitfire goes from trying to kill Dash in the first story to take her inside her board of ministers, for one. Then how Dash seems to seek peace, pardon and rehabilitation with her friends for then fall into her dark side, kill Applebloom and so convincing two of her friends that she can't be trusted and cancelling any chance to return friendly in the group. How Dash accepted Spitfire's offering, with an obvious betrayal plan behind, and her uncaring behaviour, even with dead threats everywhere she goes.
These are the most evident ones.
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I like to throw in many a curve ball
never try to predict an outcome 
Oh, it was a trap! What a surprise! The only thing is: it's all Twilight' s work, or there was a cooperation with Spitty?
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Oh, so it was jus Equestria's plan to capture DAsh. Well, let's see what's happen now...
Even if it's a short chapter, it's a good one. Only thing that puts me off is the time lapse. It's too large, and with no description of what happens during it. I mean: Dash is hated by almost everypony. And not even one guard tried to make her suffer? It's a bit irrealistic if you think about it, even if Dash is such an important prisoner or something like that.
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I see what you mean, sorry for the lack of explanation. I just saw it as time passing by in the cell whilst negotiations ensued, but I can see your point!
Wohoa! What an ending! Or is it... ?
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NO spoilers please!
Honestly though, I haven't decided yet whether to continue and make it a trilogy or leave it as it is - I feel this is a fitting end yet still have progressive ideas.
That was so anticlimactic it hurts.
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Well, we'll see what happens from here. If anything does.