Based 3 years on from Pegasi First, the tattered ruins of Equestria are beginning to grow back to their previous glory and Twilight's relationship with her friends is back in full flight minus Rainbow Dash, officially recorded as being deceased.
Oh, so it was jus Equestria's plan to capture DAsh. Well, let's see what's happen now...
Even if it's a short chapter, it's a good one. Only thing that puts me off is the time lapse. It's too large, and with no description of what happens during it. I mean: Dash is hated by almost everypony. And not even one guard tried to make her suffer? It's a bit irrealistic if you think about it, even if Dash is such an important prisoner or something like that.
I see what you mean, sorry for the lack of explanation. I just saw it as time passing by in the cell whilst negotiations ensued, but I can see your point!
Oh, so it was jus Equestria's plan to capture DAsh. Well, let's see what's happen now...
Even if it's a short chapter, it's a good one. Only thing that puts me off is the time lapse. It's too large, and with no description of what happens during it. I mean: Dash is hated by almost everypony. And not even one guard tried to make her suffer? It's a bit irrealistic if you think about it, even if Dash is such an important prisoner or something like that.
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I see what you mean, sorry for the lack of explanation. I just saw it as time passing by in the cell whilst negotiations ensued, but I can see your point!