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^Just click the name ;) I write because I enjoy doing so! Rainbow Dash is of course my favourite, if you hadn't gathered from my stories! Remember, Pegasi First!

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Another part of the story! And the war begins again!

Fun. Let's see what other kind of backstabbing happens.

Dash is gearing up for the battle! And her stalling to use her own plan to make Twilight going out of Canterlot: revenge is a dish best served cold, right? And only if made personally.

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Dash would hate to lose all the glory because of Spitfire :rainbowdetermined2:

Eh, can't wait to see what Dash's plan is.

This won't end well, no matter the outcome.

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Sorry, I mean about the plot...I love it so far, if you misunderstood... I'm quite engaged in what's going on so far~

Final showdown! More brutality incoming! If Twilight resorted to kill, she should be right mad!

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I know! :rainbowwild: I gave you the :fluttercry: because (hopefully) it's going to be a sad ending! Glad you're enjoying :pinkiehappy:

O.O Where is the last chapter?

Oh. Here it is. So. What happen to this chapter?

NIce ending for this trilogy. Just two little things to ask: HOW? And, WHY? I don't understand the reasons for Dash to commit suicide after all of this, putting up that big scene and then drawing that conclusion?! It seems a bit illogical and inconclusive! Unless she wanted to take the martyr role, but from her last words and acts I doubt it. So, why?

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Sorry I took it down momentarily to make a few changes.

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She didn't kill herself, Twilight's reaction magic and Dash's lunge led to the dagger ending up in the wrong mare.

I smiled at Twilight's last sentence. I really like Dash in your series, especially this chapter. She was so...wise? admirable? I dunno, I don't know what the word I'm looking for lol. Anyway, it was fun to read, and the end was great. Does that mean no Pegasi First 4, doesn't it?

7670923 Ah. Well, from how that part is written, one is easily confused about what exactly happened.

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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it :rainbowkiss: As much as I'd so love to do a fourth, the story is solely orientated on Rainbow Dash and I think she's already had too many survival stories :fluttercry:

However I was thinking about maybe writing a prequel to the first Pegasi First, describing Dash as just a recruit? Although I doubt that will be started for a week or so, maybe more.

7670960 No big deal. The important is if the story is good, and this one? This one was an heck of a good saga!

I'm going to follow you, in the hope to see more of your works!

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Thank you so much! :rainbowkiss: It means so much to me to hear when people like my work :scootangel:

It's a sad moment to let go of this series though :fluttercry:

Sad, but I prefer this conclusion. I'm glad you continued from the second. I look forward to seeing other works from you. ^^

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Pegasi First! :rainbowdetermined2:

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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the story and hope you'll enjoy my future work too!

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