Celestia's Plan

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #1 · Sep 3rd, 2016 · 3 · 2 ·

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Why doesn't this story have a dark tag?

Borshk

Borshk #2 · Sep 3rd, 2016 · 2 · ·

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Fantastic! I take it you saw dimwitdog'so art?

Tehsandmaster

Tehsandmaster #3 · Sep 3rd, 2016 · 1 · 1 ·

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Sooooo. Celestia sets up her sister to be raped? Ya...not buying it.
Also this was fairly pedestrian. Nothing really outstanding in either plot or clop. And all this noise about luna being a super awesome warrior and she succumbs that easily to another?

I'm just not feeling it.

redgriffin

redgriffin #4 · Sep 3rd, 2016 · · ·

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7533434 Yeah, I added one just cause.

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redgriffin #5 · Sep 3rd, 2016 · · ·

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7533580 Yeah, that's exactly where I got this idea from.

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redgriffin #6 · Sep 3rd, 2016 · 2 · ·

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Celestia sets up her sister to be raped? Ya...not buying it.

Yeah, that's fair I supppose. I mean, that would never really happen as far as the characters are concerned.

And all this noise about luna being a super awesome warrior and she succumbs that easily to another?

The idea of this is that she was drugged by someone she trusted. After she was drugged there really was much she could do to fight.

Fwelin

Fwelin #7 · Sep 4th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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So, based on Flurry, is this Elite Guard going to be at least partiallh made up of alicorns?

Also, how long until Celestia decides she wants more than ~1 potential guard member per year, and decides go get Twilight involved too? Sequel?!

redgriffin

redgriffin #8 · Sep 5th, 2016 · · ·

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So, based on Flurry, is this Elite Guard going to be at least partiallh made up of alicorns?

Nah, probably not. I Like the idea of them being demi-god while being an alicorn should be reserved for full god status. The demi-god ponies would live longer, be stronger, harder to kill, etc.

Also, how long until Celestia decides she wants more than ~1 potential guard member per year, and decides go get Twilight involved too? Sequel?!

Hmm, that is an idea that I like. Twilight would definitely be less enthusiastic about it. In this story Luna outwardly enjoys it after a bit but with Twilight I guess I could make it that she would hate and love it at the same time...

Totally Not Good

Totally Not Good #9 · Nov 2nd, 2016 · · ·

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who's has the warrior genes in them

Not sure if the who should have an apostrophe s. Pretty sure that makes it "who is".

PonyDragon

PonyDragon #10 · Jan 26th, 2017 · 1 · 2 ·

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I have a concept for an potential sequel:

A few weeks later:
Celestia: "Hello Luna, you wanted to see me?"
Luna: "Yes, please come in and make yourself at home."
C: "Thanks" Sits down "I hope you aren't too angry about you-know-what anymore, are you?"
L: "Don't worry, I know you did it for the best of Equestria. Here, have a tea. I made it extra for you."
C: "Why thank you, you know I simply love tea." Drinks the tea.
L: "Of course I know. I'm your best siter after all" Smiles. "But I had been thinking. You are right if you say Equestria needs better soldiers to defend it at times of war. And I'm definitly the most-capable to raise the soldiers needed."
C: "I'm glad you see it that way."
L: "But currently we aren't at war. On the contrary: we have better relationships to our neighbours than ever before. And it is important too keep it that way."
C: "I agree. ... Is it just me or is it suddenly quite hot in here?"
L: "Don't mind it, everything is under control. But, back to topic. We need good soldiers, but, even more, we need good diplomats."
*knocking at the door*
L: "Oh, that must be Twilight. Just in time. Twilight, you please, come in!"
*Twilight enters the room*
Twilight: "Hello Luna. I got the spell you are asking for."
L: "That sounds great! Here, have some tea!"
T: "Thanks. But I still would like to know why you asked me to bring an gender-change-spell here."
L: "Nothing special. Just an thought I got from my sister. But say, you consider yourself a good diplomat, right?"
T: "Of course! I'm not as good as Celestia, but close behind. Why are you asking?"
C: *gulp* (I somehow have a bad feeling about this...)
L: "Shortly Celestia had the idea how to make a new generation of elite-soldiers: Breed the best male with the best female soldier available."
T: "An interesting idea. That will probably work. ... Why is it suddenly so hot in here?"
L: "And to make the best diplomats you breed the best male with the best female, right?"
T: "Of course, but what are you implying?"
L. "Well, I will tell you, but first, please go into this magical-sealed room over there. You too, Celestia It's time to set my plan into motion. The potion should reach it's max very soon, and we don't want to waste anything, now do we?"

Like I said, just an concept, so it's horrible written and a crime against the rules of good writing.
(But still the best story I wrote to date).

Of course it doesn't have to be with Twilight, any other 'male' should to.
(Including Twilight was partly inspred by this comment over here: 7537029 )

If someone against all odds uses this please give me a note.

redgriffin

redgriffin #11 · Apr 17th, 2017 · · ·

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Of course it doesn't have to be with Twilight, any other 'male' should [do].

I'll be honest, I'm into a lot of weird things but futa is not one of them. I don't think I'll be continuing with this setting of princesses getting forcibly impregnated. This story was really just to test things out.

After a long 2 terms in university I have finally started writing a new story, and it's nearly finished. It's anthro this time. It involves Rarity being a big sister and teaching Button Mash and Sweetie Belle about sex.

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