• Member Since 4th Jan, 2015
  • offline last seen Feb 3rd, 2019

El Hombre


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It is quite the story my good sir keep up the fantastic work
Btws talk about one hell of a investigation and i also wonder if rainbows gonna get in on this

It's almost a cliche

Yeah no. IT IS totally cliche in every way possible. I made it half way through the read before stopping and groaning over all the obviousness of it. :facehoof:

7488168

Thanks ^^, there will be surely more.

7488186

You can bet on it :rainbowwild:

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What exactly was obvious? An explanation would be great.

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In what way it is distracting if i'm allowed to ask. The first third or quarter i wrote that yeah but when did i write it in the other parts?

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What wall of text?

7488700 theres hardly any paragraphs

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Ok, thanks for answering, i'll definitely get rid of that "problem" :twilightsmile:

7488760 yeah, just add a few spaces between the lines

7488695 A typical brony gets ponies of their dreams in their apartment story. Its very cliche and corny.

7488879 did you not read on because the story says that he was the only one that new about the show and stuff in his town

7491317 wow jeez man it was just a question if you disliked the story you could have just disliked it

Good clopfic! It would've been better if Rainbow Dash came into the action...

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Don't worry, it will happen in chapter 2...

At first I was like :pinkiesmile:

Then I was like:pinkiegasp:

The guy next to me was like :facehoof::facehoof:




THAT WAS AMAZING!!!:pinkiesmile:

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Thank you very much. :twilightblush:

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I'm working on it. A little bit stressful lately but chapter 2 is coming for sure.

7577523 ITS SO EEPIC EPIC EPIC EPIC EPIC EPICEPICEPICBDJEHSGSGSUEVEVBEISVWJSVEISGSISBSIEEIPIC!!!!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile:



Damn Pinkie calm down



Lol:twilightsmile:

excellent work. keep it up. adding you to my favorites and following.

So do you plan on updating this ever? I want to read it but Im not going to bother if its dead.

Oh well now it's cancelled, just like most of the stories on here.... this site is doing my head in

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