Fluttershy was always different, an outcast to be precise. She has, powers, visions. Visions about the future. Everypony calls her crazy, so she decides not to share her secrets with anyone. But her roommate, also lifelong friend, Discord does believe her. But things in the big city help her to put her mind at rest. Until they start again. And she receives visions of her friends, not good ones. She later finds a mysterious mare who has her same abilities. Is just like her. But sometimes, you can't always control your powers.
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Ah, the stage is set and Fluttershy has visions. I've wanted to mention this for a while, but that's an great concept!
It must be fun having someone like Discord for a roommate. Great job showing his interaction with Fluttershy, and how Fluttershy fits into this new version of Equestria.
By this point, Fluttershy almost feels like a benevolent Carrie (from the Stephen King novel)--if someone took the time to help her manage her powers or emotions. I'm also interested in finding out more about Sensila. You do well in setting up her character here, and getting me as a reader invested in her as a mentor of sorts for Fluttershy. Awesome!
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Thanks!
7807909 You're welcome! ^_^