• Published 21st Aug 2016
  • 8,649 Views, 8 Comments

Hot Summer On The Cherry Ranch. - Lunasservant1985



Cherry Jubilee always takes good care of those who work hard for her, real good care...

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Comments ( 8 )

This is my first Jubilee clopfic and you nailed it :raritywink:

7500965 my first writing one too

You need an editor to fix a lot of these misspellings and grammar errors. Besides that, the pacing in the clop section was well done. You get a like.

One thing I noticed was that there was no mention of a "Human" tag, yet in the first paragraphs I already find you mentioning that the main character is a human.

I'd fix it ASAP

This was good great t see cherry gets some love

Tis a glorious addition to thine repituar of stories!

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