Shadow Wolf is the son of Captain Morning Night and Lady Flower Shine, he's a student of Princess Celestia, like Twilight. They grew up knowing each other and learning the same spells, there's one thing they don't have in common, the love they have for the day and night. Twilight, Day, and Shadow Wolf, Night. Once their families meet at the birthday party for Shadow Wolf, he let's a out secret about his love for the night. He wished he meet Nightmare Moon and wanted her to win the battle. Or did he let out that secret? Years Later, Twilight's a element of Harmony. Then what's Shadow Wolf? A Night Guard. That's what he is. Will these two remain friends? Or will their friendship die out?
Chapters (3)
A grey and black OC with red eyes that has Nightmare Moon as his cutie mark and actually has the name Shadow AND Wolf? And is going to fight for evil to stop the Elements of Harmony? And is Celestia's first student? Even though he hates the Sun?
You can't be serious man. You can't. This is... laughably bad.
What did the day even do to Shadow Wolf to make him hate it so much? Give him a bad sunburn? Did he stare at the sun too long and it hurt his eyes? This kid's got issues.
Also:
Really glad you told us this twice. I honestly got confused and wasn't sure she really wanted to know if he liked the story.
I like it; sometimes cliché works.
Reading this is like a car crash, painful but I just can't look away.
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At first Shadow Wolf liked the day, but as he got older he started to like the night more until he hated the day. And since he's Celestia's first student, he pretended to like the day more than the night.
This story seems to have a very good premise but it feels clunky.
Your story feels a bit blocky man do you have a editor?
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No...Why?
7383276 you need one
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okay...