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Captain Nibbles


Praise the two sisters and their lights of guidence they bestow upon their subjects.

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As Zephyr grows older and stronger, so does his past.

After moving into a new home. Zephyr had hoped he was rid of the thing that plagued his nights, but it quickly becomes clear that he'd been followed.

With a grim future ahead of him, Zephyr must learn to face his fear or be lost to the darkness forever.

Art is sketched by Fritzybeat and colored in by immagoddampony.

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Comments ( 6 )

That's was quite a read. Very intriguing!

7382989 Thanks.

Wasn't that big of a story though and is tiny compared to some of my other work. Which happens to be incomplete and a ton more complex.

Perhaps I should see about rewriting said pieces, as they were written a year ago and a year ago my work sucked.

There is no ghosts or goblins under your bed,

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Great read! Zephyr really grew!:heart:

7383435 Typo!!! ARGHHH! Thanks...I edit all this stuff myself, so I occasionally miss a few.

A very interesting story, I'm glad it wasn't confirmed whether the Shadow was real or not, sometimes a mystery is better than an explanation! :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you, I didn't even realize I left that open...maybe I should write that already drafted out sequel, but I haven't written anything in close to two years now, and who knows? Maybe the shadow will return in his imagination or real life. (Not quite decided since the first draft is an awkward puberty schoolyear comedy with a sinister backstory)

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