Prince of Equestria

by Chlumpy

Extra: Starlight Lullaby

Starlight Lullaby

Hush now, my Jackie
Be still now, don't cry.

Sleep as you put out your flames.

Sleep and remember
This starlight lullaby.

So I'll be there with you
In your dreams.

Starlight, oh starlight
Shine brightly this night.

Show the King
Safely to his home.

Let him return
To the ponies he loves.

Starlight, shine brightly
For me.

Hush now, my Jackie
Be still now, don't cry.

Stand for what's right
And what's true.

Protect your kingdom
With the blessing of fire.

Starlight, shine brightly
This night.

Sleep and remember
This starlight lullaby.

So I'll be there with you
In your dreams.

Comments

[BlockHead Jones]

I only came here because of the description...and that wasn't even that good

GC: NOT B4D.... FOR 4 F1RST T1M13.... H3H3H3H3H3H3

[Chlumpy]

1501423 thanks...

[Chlumpy]

People, please...if you are going to criticize my fic, be respectful. I give you respectful replies, so please give me the same. Also, I would apreciate it if you could give me tips, seeing how this was the first story I wrote, taking a total time of two years to complete. Yes, I know about the grammar errors, but I wrote the chapters around the time my melatonin kicks in. Thank you and God bless.

[Sky Wishes 7266]

I thought the story was excellent. I like how I could hear and visualize the characters saying their lines. Please tell me there is a sequel. Continuing the life if the new Blackjack and Discord and Celestia's lives together. I would totally read it.

[Chlumpy]

4917677 thank you for the criticsism.

[Pirate Jesus]

4936141
I know, right?

[Deadreaderz]

"You lose Celestia," the stallion leered, raising his sword. "You always lose." He plunged his weapon into her chest, the Princess gasping. "Chaos has won!" He leaned down and whisperd in her ear, "Equestria shall burn."

[MLPFan234]

Why must there ALWAYS BE THAT BLACK OC'S????