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dash446
Okay its benn ages since i was on here, feels strange...
dash446
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Some minor errors but, and I'm not ashamed to admit it, I laughed my ass off.
7587023 thanks!
*brick pokes dash446 in back*
Dash446: "Yes, Brick?"
*Brick shoves ' cinnamon falafel' in dash446's face.*
Pony Brick: "Falafel!!!"
7587023 also, do you know any appropriate groups I can put this story in?
Mmm...
...
Honestly, I'm not sure what to say, I guess its supposed to be comedy, but I didn't really... laugh. I guess? It seems forced, and far too silly. Most of what this Brick guy is saying is weird, if he honestly that idiotic?
Ehh... have a thumbs up for effort, but its not my cup of tea.
Sorry Dash446
7587321 well he is from the movie Anchorman. He's the mentally retarded weatherman that Steve Carell played in Anchorman.
Thanks anyways. There is going an update on it will something I can call mine soon. I am half way done with the next chaptor of that soon be shire to look for it.
7587377
Maybe if I had seen the movie I might have gotten the reference, but I haven't sorry buddy.
Well, keep up the good work regardless, I might check it out later on.
I think this could be a funny story but I feel that you rush the writing way too much, as I don't know a thing about who Brick is what sort of person he is and so forth. I hope you will keep on improving in your writing.
7663364 as in the part about brick, he is from the movie Anchorman Steve Carell please him. He is mentally retarded weatherman.
Brick
7663453 thanks I will be shire to inprove
7587398 dustchu here's who Brick is
7587398 this is just in case if I made a mistake on the comments -dustchu here's who Brick is
7663453 I mean I don't get much about him in the story itself, there isn't any information of how he is and how are the six mares how are trying to help him.
7663708 I will fix this. I was just in a rush writing it.
7663467
Oooohohoho, lol, I get it now. Nice.
7663708
Your avatar is 666 different kinds of awesome right now, hehe
7663906 now that is a wrap up of brick.
7663910
Nice
7663911 now that you saw that clip are you going to watch the movie?
7663917
Eh, maybe if I can get my hands on it.