Fluttershy was always the shy pony in Ponyville.
Though her friends never knew the real reaon she was so shy: because of her dark past.
She became how she is now because of that...
But what happens when her friends want to find out more about her past and un-cover something they wish they hadn't...
They will face the deadly trials and traps in store for the long forgotten past buried for years under Fluttershy's house.
The only thing that stops them from freedom and truth is their dearest and what seemed to be nice, shy and kinds friend... Fluttershy.
It starts off slightly boring but upcoming chapters will definately be more sad, tragic and will (hopefully) leave you on the edge of your seat...
Chapters (8)
I'm not sure where this could be going but like it....I will be watching......very closely..
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i like the idea, but i don't want to be hooked on an unfinished storry (the waitnig is terrible). right in the read later. and trust me, i WIL
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I'm 'pretty' sure where it's going... but my mind changes constantly so you'll have to wait and see
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and thanks, I didn't know if it was good or not 
Hahaa thanks, and I know I'll be updating... whenever
>> DreamAttacker I really hope this turns out how I expect it to. I see murder in the future though.
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it might just be me who see myself in those stories, but yes. you do indeed have a great idea. just please, don't make it an action fanfic. your target should be to make the reader cry... alot.
the dark past kind of reminds me about myself
please don't ask why. i won't answer.
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I wonder why, and I won't ask, everyone has their secret 
Hehee... you may expect right...
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Thanks, I never stray off... and my friends tell me I'm good at making crying stories
>> DreamAttacker
well then....let the games....Begin!
This sounds interesting. Gonna have to keep watching and see what happens.
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Thanks you muchly
i will be honest its not the best story I've read but its pretty good and i like it also it is better than alot of other stories I've read so im not saying its bad.
it is an interesting story line and has me wanting to read more so i do like it.
also i was wondering how did you come up with this story?
good story telling
(not a hate comment)
P.S.
when do you think the next one will come out?
faving this so i can always come back to this story
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thank you
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it is classed as dark
YEEEESH NEW CHAAAPTER
uuuuuuuh i cant wait D: i1053.photobucket.com/albums/s466/Nicole_Waraksa/____happiest__pony__ever______by_rainbowplasma-d4uo9y8.png
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i cant think of anything, but ill keep trying 
Ohh im sorry, im writing it write now, im just trying to think of something interesting to happen...
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pinkie pie got her wings
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and I love to write darker sides of people and their personalities. Secrets and hidden things always interest me and I love knmowing people enjoy reading it. (going off subject) I guess it came into my head when I was drawing a my little amnesia (If you wanna see them here's my deviantART though I'm not good at drawing either that much: http://cheesenachos123.deviantart.com/ ) and then the idea 'Fluttershy's always the shy one... what if she wasn't' then I started thinking through it and writing... but my mind changes constantly so so many different scenarios formed... originally she was going to be a pirate but then something darker came that I liked more...
I understand I'm not the best of writers so it doesn't bother me
I love to make thigns that interest people,
How did I come up with it... hmm... well in general I have a pretty messed up mind
OH!! And having an over active imagination helps
That was fun to write, no one normally asks me how I came to writing these things
And thanks
Next chapter - probably soon, I'm currently writing it
i made fanart of this! http://speedcow12.deviantart.com/#/d54seo4
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Wow thanks
cool?
http://imgur.com/wmlnB
I made a fan pic because i love your series!
Keep up the good work! c:
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whoa.... thats really good
thank you and i will
this is BLOODY EPIC! youre the best writer evar
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:DDD THANK YOU
Pinkie Pie go bye-bye.
Pinkie Pie go bye-bye.
if you need some inspiration i recomend you reading this http://www.fimfiction.net/story/43782/Backwards%3A-A-Not-so-Element-of-Kindness as it has dark fluttershy too and she murders 3 of the 5 sane ponies :3
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thank you, i've been thinking about where this should go for ages
Can't wait for a new chapter ever since I've started reading on fim fiction all the storys ive read are about gore and sadness I don't know why. I'm not usually 1 to like that stuff but this is one that I can read and not go ewww! Instead I'm like omg what is gonna happen next!
WHATS WRONG WITH ME IM LAUGHING!?!?!?
