• Member Since 16th Jun, 2012
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HiddenlifEpony


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The main pony (Thunder Storm) wakes up with amnesia. While trying to figure out his past and get settled in with Ponyville, he gets a girlfriend, a wife, and an adopted daughter. He manages to save Ponyville once but gets his hoof cut off in the process. He is the witness to a murder as well as a murderer.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

Why does everyone want to have a name that refers to lighting or thunder.

755975 i cant come up with names at all. Coming up with the name was the first chance i had at being creative in writing (and i started reading other fanfics just a few weeks ago)

756916 well for a start you did a good job

I want to help you with this story.
Give me some time to read it and give some long paragraph with harsh and constructive criticism.
But mostly constructive.

When are you putting the next part?:heart:

841244 i got the whole thing written out on paper, but i`ll let u revise it when i type it up

850242
I'll edit it out as you type it up.

841299 as soon as i can feel goood enough to type it

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