Alternate S6E2 ending.
There are a few reasons Sunburst isn't a grand mage. Lacking power is one, mistiming another, and poor planning is a third. Sunburst had been on bad times since his time at Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns. Always with advice with no way to help, he became recluse in a new home in the Crystal Empire.
Then a mare he hadn't seen since colthood knocks on his door.
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Not bad so far. You know, I'm surprised they haven't made a character tag for Sunburst yet.
We definitely need more character tags. Sunburst, Coloratura, Flurry Heart, seperate tags for Limestone and Marble Pie, Moondancer, suprised after all this time there still isn't a Starswirl the Bearded tag.
This is a good 'what if' you have going on.
The exploration of Sunburst's past through the shards is a nice touch, though I'm not sure if the Crystal Heart would work that way since it is supposed to amplify happier emotions, shouldn't he be seeing his happiest moments? Just a thought. Though the way you ended it makes me feel like I'm reading the first chapter of a lengthier story. Still good regardless just wish the idea could be explored further. Good work!