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Darkscout99


A young brony, using ponies to try to further his writing skills. profile pic drawn by fatalspark.

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DJ appears in Equestria five years before the events of season one start. On the day of nightmare moon's return, he travels into Ponyville for the some potion ingredients Zecora needed at the time. When Twilight meets him she decides to study him, and misses the raising of the sun ceremony in the process. When DJ accompanies the girls through the Everfree to gather the elements of harmony, the whole universe is set on a different, yet similar path.

NOTE: This story is set in an alternate universe, so I will do my best to make sure all characters will be introduced. I'm going to be writing almost a new story line because of this, but I will make sure to include all of the major villains and unique experiences the best i can.

Chapters (10)
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Comments ( 12 )

I like what I've read so far and I look forward to seeing where you take this

I am pleased:moustache:

Just about average i think quality wise. Decent but could be better. Still a nice stage where the story is set.

so whens the next chapter coming out? i really like this story. but i'd like to see more on the changling side.:twilightsmile:

7465014 good news is that the next chapter should be about the changeling side of things. Bad news is that I want to write up a buffer and get more regular updates so I'm not sure when the next update will be. Its not dead though I will say that.

Four hundred thousand years is a bit unreasonable for a biological creature.

7668957 celestia is supposed to be immortal. That means that if she dies with he sun, which I'm assuming would be about the size of our sun if not smaller, she could have around 10 billion years from birth to death of a star. Even assuming that she was born half way through the life, she would be around 5 billion years old at her death.

Keep in mind that they can die due to poison, sickness, or being hurt.

I NEED MOOOOORRRRREEEE!!!!!

Eh .. DARK MAGIC , WHITE MAGIC WHO CARES , THEY ARE THE SAME COIN ! But the dark has more power ... but certain ... dagner of TAINT and Addiction , but could be useful for good too .

“Now onto the knives. They are also enchanted with the strength of our hive’s will. They should never become dull nor break if you keep us in good spirits. Also, they can morph into other types of bladed weapons if need be. All you need to do is channel some magic into them and focus on the weapon you want it to be.

I have similiear , but the gunblade imagine is the prefered form , but only with intent and imagination or need for what and permission for what changes into that . Like it could srink or strech , or change form in anything , even huge hammer , bat , cricket bat ... skitche , axe... anything , even shield . just intent Ineed this and voala .

(That is anger, irriatation) VERY GOOD CELESTIA THAT PREDJUICE HURT A HECK A LOT OF FUKEN TON HALF DISPLACERS , SOME BECAME VENGENFUL , WELL DONE , HALF OF YOUR ENEMIES WERE CREATED OF EITHER IGNORANCE , MISTREATMENT AND PARANOIA ?

TAKE A LOOK AT THIS IS THIS OOZING DARK MAGIC AND VOID WITH LITTLE LIGHT AND CHAOS AND ENTROPY PLUS.... WHO KNOWS WHAT THIS IS MY OC , ANGRY IN FULL POTENTIAL !

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