• Member Since 6th Feb, 2016
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Darkscout99


A young brony, using ponies to try to further his writing skills. profile pic drawn by fatalspark.

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Aaron, a human male, gets taken to equestria one night after falling asleep, and decied he will travel around equestria and beyond, because he wants to see the beauty in this world, to forget the ugliness of his old one.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 3 )

Well done! A place of improvement would be to make each paragraph a little shorter. I'm already loving this! :twilightsmile:

A quick note: should be "Luna" with a capital L, not "luna". just a little typo :twilightsheepish:

Self-insert stories are not gonna help you here.

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