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TwilightAppleDash


Third time lucky? We'll see...

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Jacopo Greyson was just a young kid, trying to shelter his sister from the harsh realities of the real world. Until one day, he makes a wish upon a strange star in the sky.

Now he's in Equestria. He's a brightly colored pony.

And so is his sister.

This is the story of a boy and his younger sister growing up in an ideal world.

P.S. Big Shout out to the one, the only Mocha Star, big props to him helped me alot!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

If Trixie is going to be the one Thunder Heart marries or is going to be in future chapters. I suggest adding the tag for Trixie.

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Wait and see, my dear pony is all I can say. Wait and see

Okay. I've given this chapter a look over. It certainly reads as an interesting prologue. :pinkiehappy:.. And chapter 1 is interesting too.

Your description of Luna and her actions are excellent. You've clearly given it some thought to how to present it and it is something for me to aspire to. I'll make a note of getting around to further chapters. John29.

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