• Member Since 4th Feb, 2016
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TwilightAppleDash


Third time lucky? We'll see...

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This story was created initially under the name A Tragic Tale of an Equestrian High school Drama. Sorry for any confusion!

It started out like any other day. School was boring, dragged as it usually did. The girls arranged a studying period up at A.J's house. A secret is revealed and tragedy occurs when A.J goes down to fetch more cider.

One of the friends are attacked and wakes from a coma, changed.

Meanwhile, Anon-A-Miss strikes at Canterlot High and everyone blames one girls, including those she thought were her friends.

With no-one to turn to, she succumbs to darkness and the worlds only hope is a girl with whom neither got on very well.

Looks like the world is doomed.......or is it???

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 11 )

Is this a FlutterJack?? :ajbemused:

(P/s: don't mind me.. I'm just expressing my dislike of lesbi shippings... it's YOUR story..:pinkiehappy:)

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Eeyup sorry... Hopefully this doesn't creat a spoiler alert for anyone.

I'm sorry you don't like the story, but I can recommend my O/C story that I'm working, Its called Equestrian Magic (Aka the Tricks of Trixie).
It's a relatively straight story.

7070125 thanks.... that's interesting. .. u certainly did warm me up to pony romance fanfics.. ( somehow I prefer EG romance since I for one found pony romance weird) but, well... ignore my blunt opinions. ... it's YOUR story..:pinkiehappy:

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In your opinion, how do you think this story should end???

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End it epicly.. (lol.. easier said than done)

Hmmm... u hav to set the reason why AJ started to be different first.. THEN I hav an opinion how to end it

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Checked the G-doc lately???

:rainbowkiss: :twilightsmile:

So... Why'd you decide to change the name?

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well, my dear pony. That is a very good question.

The title was originally A Tragic Tale of An Equestrian Highschool Drama.

Looking at the five chapters I currently have, it bears almost no connection to my story.

As for the new story, well based upon the story, you'll find that is is aptly named.

P.S SPOILER ALERT!!! Applejack and Sunset never really got on well, even after Sunset changed for the better. So one night Applejack invites her over, hoping to make amend with her. Unfortunately A.J gets attacked and transformed to a Vampire. And After the Anon-A-Miss attacks hit the school, Sunset loses control and reverts to her demon side. They develop an unlikely friendship and both eventually become good.

A.J becomes a vampire. (Vampire eyes are Crimson) and Sunset becomes a demon (Her demon skin was a deep golden colour.)

Plus, A.J's cutie mark is of three crimson apples and Sunset's is half- crimson and half golden. Also indicating the friendship. SPOILER ALERT OVER!!!

Awesome! !! Sorry I didn't help you much... but FlutterJack seemed less cringy now you wrote this...
:pinkiehappy:

Well if it's not forgiveness it's this lesbian shit.

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Well I'm sorry you don't enjoy this type of story. I would ask why you are on this site then, but that's not my business.
All I can say is, the story takes a dark turn.

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