Twilight Sparkle has finally perfected a device allowing ponies to speak to each other over great distances. Unfortunately, the first call she receives is from Pinkie.
After a semi-productive day of job hunting and FIM watching, our protagonist takes a nap on their couch. They find themselves in a wonderful dream in the land of Equestira, and it all seems so real! Except, your not supposed to feel pain in dreams...
Why did they all take it so easily? (except Fluttershy) I expected Twilight to ask questions and demand answers. The other were pretty much in character as far as I could tell.
Loved AJ's. 1) Are you a monster trying to destroy my town? If yes, fight. If no, go to 2. 2) Does this relate to apple bucking? If yes, listen. If no, go buck apples.
The way I wrote Twilight she already had an in depth understanding of exactly what was going on concerning the author talking to her and had read a book with exactly that kind of scenario, leaving her more curious about humans themselves.
There are plenty of great non-cloppy fics on this site, go read "Banishment Notice" or "Contraptionology" they are two of my recent favorites. That said, great to know you enjoyed it, I hope you won't dislike me if I publish clop later (being eclectic enough that this will very likely happen).
745824 Eeyup, Keepin it plain and simple. Ah mean, I coulda offered her some homemade mead, but I didn't have any on me.
it was cool and refreshing (you know...from so much clop)
Why did they all take it so easily? (except Fluttershy)
I expected Twilight to ask questions and demand answers.
The other were pretty much in character as far as I could tell.
Loved AJ's.
1) Are you a monster trying to destroy my town?
If yes, fight. If no, go to 2.
2) Does this relate to apple bucking?
If yes, listen. If no, go buck apples.
WHat? Do you mean Rainbow didn't realise what the author was trying to tell her?
Guy: You're fictional.
Like Daring Do? Yes, I am.
Aheheheh. That was a humorous read, my friend.
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The way I wrote Twilight she already had an in depth understanding of exactly what was going on concerning the author talking to her and had read a book with exactly that kind of scenario, leaving her more curious about humans themselves.
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There are plenty of great non-cloppy fics on this site, go read "Banishment Notice" or "Contraptionology" they are two of my recent favorites. That said, great to know you enjoyed it, I hope you won't dislike me if I publish clop later (being eclectic enough that this will very likely happen).
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Eeyup, Keepin it plain and simple. Ah mean, I coulda offered her some homemade mead, but I didn't have any on me.
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Thank you kindly!
I don't always go into denial but when I do, there is nothing wrong with me I don't know what you're talking about.
745848 well i mean that from so.much clop, but i.think.what i really wated to say there is that "cool and refreshing from.clopping so much lolz"
i feel so for fluttershy so much embarresment