Lance was never a pony for adventure, preferring to stay with his inventions in the bowels of the Auraskate, but when a space colony drops off the radar, his ship departs, carrying the Princess and the Mane 6. When they arrive, they find the colony....
Destroyed.
Can the Mane 6 and their new found friend help save Equestria with the help of a long dead Princess's idea?
Read on to find out (Chapter 1 and 2 are for intro. 3 is where things get started...)
not bad cant wait for more
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Your too kind.
The next chapter comes out next week.
Ooo a halo-pony crossover fanfic! i dont see much halo pony crossover anything that much (huge halo fan).
Definatly going to watch this.
Just finished the chapter, im liking it so far. hopefully this will get noticed more by fellow halo fans!
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OMG
Another halo-pony fan?
Oh yeah, the next chapter will come out before next Wednesday. Writers promise.
Good job. Your writing reminds me of the books. Also you write like Erik N. (this is a good thing) Well done sir i look forward to more.
Go to that halo books they are a welth of info. I really like where I think this is going and I also like the way your building the plot.(No pun intended) You could try to make your chapters a bit longer though. Also let your story breath, you don't need to fast. It is halo after all. All and all a good read so far. Well done.
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Hey thanks man.
Yeah, I have all the Halo novels and books here, but I wanted to, you know, keep it an original.
Thanks again for comment, I guess its time to hit the books again.
This looks very interesting, (Also dat minecraft reference)
Cant wait for the next update!!
Well done sir! I like the way you did the A.I. And that Minecraft ref made me lol. I really like this, it is my fav halo crossover. One thing that you could work on is Lance as a pony. Right now he's kinda a blank slate. Can't wait for more!
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Oh it will come...it will come.
Love this story, very well done. Also lol skyrim reference
Well thank you. All I really did was point you tward the books. It's all you man. Well done. I love this and I can't wait for more. Also if you need any help just ask. :)
Thanks but you were a big part of it I just really wanted to kill Pinkie. Just wish there were more comments readers.
I, for one, am very sad that Pinkie died.
Pinkie NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
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Sigh... Sentimental bronies.
I'd go for the shield why waste time trying to talk?
And this is EPIC
That upgrade goes perfectly with my shield upgrade
and this is still epic
I always talk to myself but I have never had an inside look of the enemy's tactics before
it doesn't bear repeating this is epic
thank you mysterious hunter for falling on my leg!
At least Fluttershy didn't die..... Right? She didn't die RIGHT!? If she did the pony responsible will be Sucked out into space with no suit and die slowly
so don't kill Fluttershy k?
oh I have lots of ideas I can lend you as long as Fluttershy DOES NOT die
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I'm suddenly VERY scared.
great story cant wait for more
my question is will they meet cortana
212862 It will probably be an AI like Cortana but not actually her since the Chief would have to be here as well
but good call on the AI
I like how you put in Octy clapping like that
and FIRST!
Also where did you get that pic of Fluttershy?
HAHAHAHAH! All dem questions.
I really dont get the partnership question...
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Google. DUH, much?
I think just typing in "Fluttershy" and scrolling like a long time will get you that pic.
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People want partnerships like between you and me.
Nah. Not now.
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lol. No one can beat this combo.
Hey guys, sorry if I become very slow on submissions this year. It's my most important year(s) coming up and I want to invest more of my time to study.
Hope ya'll understand.
One snag. You never said lance landed on the pelican.
So he should still be falling. Fuck.
Skyrim reference. I r da only one to catch it ^^
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I said that :
"The Raptor pulls ahead of me, and I fall into its welcoming embrace."
Problem solved.
369101 I never saw that.
And that was a skyrim reference right?
*tears up and gives a nod of aproval
"Halo got 20% cooler. Carry on sir, carry on."
*more manley tears are shed
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Only 20%? Why not 120%?
Just kidding. Thanks.
I always wanted a halo crossover with Spike in it. I don't know a dragon with built in armor plus Spartin training, chemicals added to a dragons normal muscle and, what I feel is the iceing on the cake, thumbs.
I don't know I guess I can always hope. Spike and the mane 6 going on spartin missons sounds awesome to me.
Ok rant over. Your Story Not bad I like it. just wish you did not put it on Hiatus it makes me
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... Spike... Rrright... Him...
Tell you the truth. I TOTALLY FORGOT WHICH CHAPTER HE COMES IN ON! I'm pretty sure he is included, but as a minor...
TOO MANY SPOILERS!
I've explained why it's on hiatus on my user page, head over there to get enlightened.
you rote cupcakes? ... im scared
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Wrote or read?
Cause I didn't write it, I read it.