Eric accepts an offer of off-campus residence at the Pie’s rock farm in exchange for physical labor and other help around the house. A certain soft-spoken, incredibly shy yet cute mare named Marble makes everything that much better.
Well... Damn. I Stayed up until 2:30 to read this final chapter and I've got to be completely honest; It was definitely more than worth it. I Love your work and I've loved following this story from start to finish, The feels, the smiles, the awesome twist... Well done my friend, you've crafted a beautiful short story, Bravo!
I absolutely cannot wait to pursue your other projects, it has been a true pleasure reading your work, Flammenwerfer.
Very very very beautifully written, I very much enjoy stories like this that focus's on the romance and personalities of the characters but still isnt afraid to get dirty. Easily one of the best fics i've ever read. 10/10
I loved this story. Marble came a long way since the first chaoter from shying away from Eric to going to a dance with him. She came from being nervous by being smiled at to taking charge on the sack and losing her virginity. Hell, even when Eric spend the chaoter depressed at the possibility of leaving Marble due to his semester ending, Marbke simply decided to transfer to his original university. The ending was marvelous and I loved how you improved Marble's self confidence.
This was a fantastic read. Start to finish, everything was well executed, and the plot progressed at a natural pace. The characters themselves adapted and morphed as time went on, and by the end, they were not only a couple, but a couple that knew and understood the other so well that there was almost no hesitation when they proclaimed their love for the other.
“ERIC!... UHNNN! Holy Luna, yes! YES!... MMMPH!... DON’T STOP DON’T STOP… MAKE ME YOURS!” she cried out much louder.
I'm pretty sure the whole family knows now.
“Well… I just maybe might’ve taken a trip or two to Canterlot to look up information about an across-the-portal university…” she clued him in elusively.
Um, what.
“What it means is that she’s going with you!” she pointed out so bluntly.
DAAAAAAAAAAYUM ERIC YOU JUST OUTSCORED EVERYONE IN THE MLB, NBA, MLG AND ALL THE DANK MEMES!!
“And on that note...” Maud abruptly said, cutting into the couple’s bonding time. She tossed a hefty duffel bag into the room, the item landing squarely in front of the embracing couple with a loud thud. It was filled to capacity with all of Marble’s essentials. Maud and Limestone grinned simultaneously. “...you two have a train to catch.”
That was out-fuckin'-standing. An absolute pleasure to read. Rounded out my fortnight of work, superbly. I don't get the time at work to visit this site much anymore but, I'll be fucked, if I wasn't going to make the time to read the final chapter of this.
I'm chompin' at the bit for your Stella story more than ever now.
Flame... You couldn't have ended it any better.... I.. I'm in tears.... This story.... It's... It's perfect..... I... I can't thank you enough for existing.... I... I don't know what to say..... I needed this.... I truly did.... I didn't really want it to end.. But all stories have to end... I love you flame
Also.... Could you maybe think about writing another story like this? Like a long romantic "make you feel good" story in the future? You're way too good for this stuff...
Flammenwerfer, i can't thank /you/ enough for writing. your story was beautiful, and you've been the highlight of several of my days. Keep up the good work, and i already can't wait for your next story.
HOLY SHIT!!! I am currently in a lost of words but I try my best.
First of all: WOW!! Just WOW!! This story is and was amazing from start to finish! The end was the best!! I really love storys like this from you Flammen! And I wish and hope that we maybe see a sequal about these two in the human world. With that being said: Have a good night and keep your good work up!!
7280931 I don't think you want a sequel. This story was fine, there is nothing left about these characters to tell. You're just, understandibly, sad that it's over.
7280095 There's a lot of stories you can read in a year; if you mean that, then damn, THAT'S a compliment
7280124 Goddamn you really liked that chapter huh . And don't worry, I've got more than a few projects coming up that focus mainly on comedy with romance (though not cheesy rom-com)
I loved the story, the drama, the romance, the burning love the two of them have! I have one last question.....
When's the wedding~?
Please tell me there's an epilogue coming of Marble meeting Eric's family? Please?
Well... Damn. I Stayed up until 2:30 to read this final chapter and I've got to be completely honest;
It was definitely more than worth it. I Love your work and I've loved following this story from start to finish, The feels, the smiles, the awesome twist... Well done my friend, you've crafted a beautiful short story, Bravo!
I absolutely cannot wait to pursue your other projects, it has been a true pleasure reading your work, Flammenwerfer.
Sequel?
Oh, I freaking loved this!
I have to say, this is your best yet! I'm gonna be rereading this multiple times, and it's going in my top favorite!
Very very very beautifully written, I very much enjoy stories like this that focus's on the romance and personalities of the characters but still isnt afraid to get dirty. Easily one of the best fics i've ever read. 10/10
7278985 you will have to wait and see, just like us normal, only one or two story folks
*thine
Methinks thou art missing something rather important.
*thee
Well done, very very well done! Especially right up at the ending. That Eric is a lucky bastard.
Absol-f-ing-utely wonderful chapter!
One of my favorite shorter-length stories. I most definitely look forward to more.
I loved this story. Marble came a long way since the first chaoter from shying away from Eric to going to a dance with him. She came from being nervous by being smiled at to taking charge on the sack and losing her virginity. Hell, even when Eric spend the chaoter depressed at the possibility of leaving Marble due to his semester ending, Marbke simply decided to transfer to his original university. The ending was marvelous and I loved how you improved Marble's self confidence.
I give it...
An eleven
out of a possible five...
If you get this NSP reference, you are okay in my book.
That was a beautiful story.... glad I stuck around to read it all the way!
This was a fantastic read. Start to finish, everything was well executed, and the plot progressed at a natural pace. The characters themselves adapted and morphed as time went on, and by the end, they were not only a couple, but a couple that knew and understood the other so well that there was almost no hesitation when they proclaimed their love for the other.
Well done. Well done indeed.
I'll be honest this is like my mom's 80's novels she collects
Not bad but, not too good either soooooo... 7/10
But good story bruh good story
7278985 This we need this. Like I think we'll riot if we don't get this.
[Upvotes and favorites vehemently]
This was sweet and wonderful.
Oh, and hot too.
Five stars.
Thank you for an enjoyable story.
You should make a sequel.
Absolutely fucking amazing, dude. I'm damn glad I found you back when you were on Fanfiction. One of my favorite writers, hands down.
7278985 I don't need ANY MORE ideas!
7279035 Cheers, man! Hopefully you get enough sleep then... and dream of Marble!
7279038 Then let's hope it keeps your attention
7279040 Not this time, buddehs
7279106 Damn, that's saying something! Thank you very much :D
7279144 Thanks a ton! It's an honor to get praise like this, that's for sure
7279199 He sure is, isn't he?
This is all i have to say...
I approve.
I'm pretty sure the whole family knows now.
Um, what.
DAAAAAAAAAAYUM ERIC YOU JUST OUTSCORED EVERYONE IN THE MLB, NBA, MLG AND ALL THE DANK MEMES!!
IT'S RAVE TIME!!!
I'm so happy for Eric.
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I'm about to read.. I'll post my experience when I finish... Oh I love you flame xD
Flammin'wanker.
That was out-fuckin'-standing. An absolute pleasure to read. Rounded out my fortnight of work, superbly.
I don't get the time at work to visit this site much anymore but, I'll be fucked, if I wasn't going to make the time to read the final chapter of this.
I'm chompin' at the bit for your Stella story more than ever now.
Good on'ya mate.
7280051 Hey! Nice to see you around again!
Don't you worry, that's getting worked on right now. Puss is actually drawing out the cover art right now and let me tell you, the lines look AMAZING.
A great ending to a great story, well done.
Loved it just loved it best story I read all year
Flame... You couldn't have ended it any better.... I.. I'm in tears.... This story.... It's... It's perfect..... I... I can't thank you enough for existing.... I... I don't know what to say..... I needed this.... I truly did.... I didn't really want it to end.. But all stories have to end... I love you flame
Also.... Could you maybe think about writing another story like this? Like a long romantic "make you feel good" story in the future? You're way too good for this stuff...
Glorious and outstanding fucking work man! Fucking hell this was one hell of a story, of which I approve of 110% man, good frigging work on this!
Damn good read, love how this went, and I am so happy for these two... mmm...
Damn good show you glorious bastard you...
Keep it up.
Dustchu, signing out.
~ <3
Going to be honest, I was kinda-sorta expecting a marriage proposal, or at the very least, Igneous' blessings for such an action.
Hell, Eric could've enlisted Marble's sisters in finding the perfect stone for the ring
666 likes you know what you mist do now
Flammenwerfer, i can't thank /you/ enough for writing. your story was beautiful, and you've been the highlight of several of my days. Keep up the good work, and i already can't wait for your next story.
Not usually a romance story person but f*** me, this had me from dot 1 right up to the very last word. Exceedingly high praise to you on this brilliant piece of work.
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Maud & Boulder Approve!
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B-b-but Flamey...
I need a sequel.
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Otherwise I won't feel complete and my heart will shatter to the ground like my broken dreams.
Please? My heart needs it or else I will die. You wouldn't let me die, would you?
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Fun fact: I had a case of friendly fire when I started to tear up lookin at that picture
This was, quite honestly, heart warming. No, scratch that, that was heart roasting (e.g. super hot). I approve immensely.
I think the only thing this story needs is an epilogue of Eric's family meeting Marble. Otherwise good job man, good job.
WOO-HOO!!
HOLY SHIT!!!
I am currently in a lost of words but I try my best.
First of all: WOW!! Just WOW!! This story is and was amazing from start to finish! The end was the best!! I really love storys like this from you Flammen! And I wish and hope that we maybe see a sequal about these two in the human world.
With that being said: Have a good night and keep your good work up!!
Cheers
PanzerBrony Metallicom
7280931 I don't think you want a sequel. This story was fine, there is nothing left about these characters to tell. You're just, understandibly, sad that it's over.
Please don't make a sequel. A few people are asking for it, but please don't. This story was nice, but there's not much left to tell.
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I did it for the lulz. But there shall be a sequel in my mind.
7279829 Nice! Glad you think so!
7279893 Well it certainly looks like you enjoyed yourself, considering you blew through the entire story in a night
7280077 Thank you, and thanks for reading
7280095 There's a lot of stories you can read in a year; if you mean that, then damn, THAT'S a compliment
7280124 Goddamn you really liked that chapter huh . And don't worry, I've got more than a few projects coming up that focus mainly on comedy with romance (though not cheesy rom-com)
7281405 Hey, it got the Jeremiah Johnson nod of approval!
Loved the ending! Those two are so cute
Why can I only give one thumbs up to this amazing story! It's just not fair
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Haha, yeah I enjoyed myself. I love the ending, I was rooting for Eric X Marble the whole time and boy am I happy for the ending!
7281405 your romance Style is to die for.. <3 I need a sequal in the future xD thanks for existing you sexy beast