Eric accepts an offer of off-campus residence at the Pie’s rock farm in exchange for physical labor and other help around the house. A certain soft-spoken, incredibly shy yet cute mare named Marble makes everything that much better.
This chapter was very sweet. It was nice to see Marble show off her figure (hope there's always pic of that) and be capable of carrying short conversations to the point of revealing her hobby of sculpting. The chapter was very sweet. Hope to see the next one soon.
Another awesome addition, good sir. And I must say, both adolescent admirers adore each other. That, sir, is romance unbridled. I applaud your adversity as an author.
Goddamnit. Marble is the cutest character ever. Fillies could take lessons from her. The weirdest part is Marble Pie fits pretty much my fantasy gf: shy, has a sense of humor, and has long straight hair, so this story is way too perfect. Update soon, Flame. I want more Marble.
The "baka" thing was a bit much, but I like how it prepares the reader for the "seppuku" bit just afterwards. I'm really enjoying how you're not making Marble out to be a constant; always scared no matter what and making Eric out to be the knight in shining armour to break her out of the dungeon. I like that you're showing her giving a concious effort to be out-going. Kudos!
this made me laugh hard .. " the familiar feeling of butterflies invading his stomach and fluttering around like degenerate assholes" almost caused a soda-on-screen moment more plz
I'm not gonna lie... I won't lie, I'ma channel my inner Applejack...
I'm hoping for some Eric/Limestone and Eric/Maud on top of the Eric/Marble, I mean, you're teasing me dude, urf. Maud looks like she was interested in him last chapter, and Limestone looks like she's loosening up hahaha, so awesome job!
“It’s more of a hobby, really… though it does kinda come in handy around the farm often,” Marble detailed timidly, closing herself off out of habit. “I sculpt marble.”
No Peter it's-ah fuck it, close enough.
I wonder how the family patriarch will feel about Eric screwing his daughter(s).
mostly because in Southern California, he and his kin thought ‘water falling from the sky’ was naught but a myth.
What? Rain, a myth? Where is this big ball of flame in the sky at that you people say exists? We have yet to see it at all; the only mention of it is on the internet.
Damn. Real nice delve into both their minds.
And Marble is adorable!
I like it!
This chapter was very sweet. It was nice to see Marble show off her figure (hope there's always pic of that) and be capable of carrying short conversations to the point of revealing her hobby of sculpting. The chapter was very sweet. Hope to see the next one soon.
This story is GREAT! I hope we see many more chapters! Keep up the good work!
Whose mouth? Hers? Eric's? Mine? Yours? Knighty's? Larson's? Providence's?
Had some sprinkles where I live; it's not all fiction! #MarchMiracles
Now let's get this romance show on the road!
7055172 Clearly knighty's duh! Thought that was clear by now! Nah man fixed that little thing, thanks m8
Another awesome addition, good sir.
And I must say, both adolescent admirers adore each other. That, sir, is romance unbridled.
I applaud your adversity as an author.
leave a thumbs up for illteration... plz...
Is that shotgun wedding bells I hear?
And then Daddy walks in an shite hits the fan
well Eric's fucked the total smeghead...
Here's the real question:
Is it more bomb-ass than anon's tea?
>Actual shit probably tastes better here too.
Do we want to know when Eric's been eating THAT?
I'm curious as to how Marble will go from this shy, socially inept person, to a quivering mess of sex, sweat, and cum
Goddamnit. Marble is the cutest character ever. Fillies could take lessons from her. The weirdest part is Marble Pie fits pretty much my fantasy gf: shy, has a sense of humor, and has long straight hair, so this story is way too perfect. Update soon, Flame. I want more Marble.
Cute little chapter. Their friendship is certainly evolving into something more intimate.
The "baka" thing was a bit much, but I like how it prepares the reader for the "seppuku" bit just afterwards.
I'm really enjoying how you're not making Marble out to be a constant; always scared no matter what and making Eric out to be the knight in shining armour to break her out of the dungeon. I like that you're showing her giving a concious effort to be out-going. Kudos!
cover plz?
As someone that lives in the central valley in California, I can confirm this is true throughout the state...
Get rid of the unnecessary Japanese terms; it ruins the immersion.
7057152 Damnit I was trying to be satirical and funny with it. Guess no one found it as such. Fair enough
Oh god I really love this.
Right now I'm aching for the next chapter of this story even more than for the season 6 premiere!
7057308 Sorry. I equate it to reading a Sonic the Hedgehog fic and suddenly everything's all "Sonikku-kun" and "Tails-chan is so kawaii desu!!!1!"
It's very jarring.
And at that moment his relationship with the shy mare became a tad a bit more complicated
Yay, Marble got a bit more out from her shell!
I also might have gotten diabetes again. Totally worth it.
7057501 Nothing personnel kid
Adorable
Great chapter keep up the good work!
so at the end Marble is smelling nice like bodywash While eric is smelling like booty
Limestone's going to be fucking pissed if she finds them like that
7057801 Coldsteel the Pone confirmed?
7068466 We've had some nice wet spells... but nowhere near what the El Nino promised unfortunately. Hopefully there may be more to come
this made me laugh hard .. " the familiar feeling of butterflies invading his stomach and fluttering around like degenerate assholes"
almost caused a soda-on-screen moment
more plz
Just another small correction this time in chapter 2:
His dong? His ass? Where did he get hit with pity?
Oh how fun it is to read a 21st century lover finding his first senpai on such a 'noticeable' occasion..
Also, Eric's got that cranky mood on him!
I'm not gonna lie... I won't lie, I'ma channel my inner Applejack...
I'm hoping for some Eric/Limestone and Eric/Maud on top of the Eric/Marble, I mean, you're teasing me dude, urf. Maud looks like she was interested in him last chapter, and Limestone looks like she's loosening up hahaha, so awesome job!
Next chapter!
Boo!
Well, he's got two of the six steps down...
No Peter it's-ah fuck it, close enough.
I wonder how the family patriarch will feel about Eric screwing his daughter(s).
i know this is mainly with marble but i was really hoping for a a harem with the pie sisters well except for pinkie i guess....
it really got my hopes up on the boarding house type of scenario, if you know what i mean!
woot!
What? Rain, a myth? Where is this big ball of flame in the sky at that you people say exists? We have yet to see it at all; the only mention of it is on the internet.
7279059 either impassive, or furious.
But those mares aren't fillies anymore, so I dont think it matters much anymore.
7056370
As much as I want to say "what the fuck, dude," I am also quite curious...