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When only things may seem normal, the Mane 6 happen to find out that Spike is the Seventh Element of Harmony! Afterwards, a great and terrible evil comes to Equestria. What great evil can it be, what will happen to our friends, can they stop Equestria from falling into the hands of the evil being? Find out in the story The True Element of Harmony.
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Them Dislikes though...I Cri Evrytiem...
Remember to like the story...or dislike of you hate it though.
Why you Fimfictioners hating for? I think this is a good story so far, write what the problem is and I'll fix it all.
Lots of grammar issues, characters are flat with odd dialogue, short chapters, and seems to retread the same ground as the Power Ponies episode. If you want I'd be glad to do a more in-depth review to point everything out and help you see what I mean.
I'm okay with Spike being a seventh element but I think you should make it more consistent with what we've seen, just an idea: Spike received his element when the others did, but since he wasn't there he didn't understand its significance and ate it, possibly thinking it was leftover from a batch of gems he'd eaten before. Now some sort of "True Harmony Blast" can't be activated until Spike learns to harness its power.
6946259 Well keep that noted down, thanks for your info Emraldilian!
That's the sound of a blow up.
I wonder how freaked out they'll be when they find out that Spike is Princess Celestia's adopted son.
Hey guys, if your wondering why the chapters are only 800 words, it's because were kind of doing something different than other stoties, thats probs why you noticed how the characters don't have and...basic life in their dialog. For this to work, were showing an earlier time of Equestria of when they found out Spike is the Seventh Element of Harmony. That's also why we added a date of Equestria and where it takes place. Watch what I mean, dialog will start to show and more in chapter 4, though you'll love chapter 3...not alot...but alot enough. So my Crew and I will be back to write Chapter 3 soon, were just thinking about a...surprise project for you all, it'll be revealed...in time ok my fellow Fimfictioners. Spectre Pie signing off.