Rainbow dash write a love letter to Twilight Sparkle, well the way Rainbow would write one.
Enjoy your Valentines Day and Happy Hearts and Hoofs to all.
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The first half was amazing but the second half looks like it was written by a second grader
6941753 I know, originally I just wanted to write the letter portion, but since I need a 1000 words for the story to be posted, I pretty much wrote the rest on the fly.
6942479 I'd suggest getting an editor, and then re-writing that last half. this shows promise, but it won't become very popular unless it's polished up and refined.
Regardless of the last half being rushed, I loved the whole thing!
A+
6943556 Thanks for the advice man
6943862 thanks man
i can see lots of spots where it seems like you rushed through writing this regardless of if you actually did rush. there are so many spots with missing words. there are also a few parts were it seems like there is a whole section of words missing