The bakery was aflame. It stood silhouetted against the darkening sky, a glowing orange beacon casting smoke into the air as the fire danced ever higher. The citizens of Ponyville crowded the streets, wandering casually past the bakery and completely ignoring the impending disaster. The day before they would have done the same. A week before they may have paid attention. A month before would have seen them panicking, rushing the bakery to save those within. But it was not any of those days. It was the day it was, and that day marked the one hundred and twelfth time that the bakery had caught fire in the space of thirty one days.
Three ponies stood on the front step of the bakery – a Unicorn, a Pegasus and an earth pony. The Unicorn and the Pegasus stood close together, shame-faced and heads hung low, but the Earth pony was dancing, bouncing on her pink hooves. A part of this was because she was proud of her students. They had tried, given it their all, and they had almost succeeded. And they would keep trying – they were, as she was, natural born bakers - they just hadn’t quite convinced the food of that yet. But another, perhaps larger part of the reason was that her fluffy, bright pink tail was aflame.
Not that she was worried, or anything – she had the bestest fire putter-outing pony in all of Ponyville and probably anywhere else too on the case, after all. But, she thought as she pirouetted through the air with a smile, panic was expected and so panic there would be. Finally, at long last, just as she opened her mouth the scream out her best friend’s name and tell her to come help already, a crack of thunder echoed through the sky and the rain began to fall. Right on top of her, and into her open mouth.
For a moment she stood there in shock, drenched from the tippy top of her pretty pink head to the bottoms of her not quite as pretty but still a nice colour anyways pink hooves. And then, as Rainbow Dash began to laugh her loud, bellowing laugh, Pinkie took aim and shot a jet of water up and straight at her mirthful face. The sight of a rainbow falling gracelessly from a cloud, swearing and cackling, was a beautiful one in its own way – not any way that was actually beautiful, but it was still fun to see, so that was okay.
Pinkie smiled widely, and turned back to the waiting twins. They gazed at her with anxious eyes, and she had to resist the urge to sigh.
“So tell me,” she asked sternly, “what do we think went wrong?”
It was the Pegasus who answered, and Pound was his name. His voice was soft and gentle – unlike his hooves, which could break through Pinkie’s rock cake with no trouble at all, even when she made it with gemstones. “Uhm…we…we forgot to turn off the oven?”
Pinkie clicked her tongue and shook her head. “Nope, nope. That’s not it at all. Pumpkin?”
Pumpkin, the unicorn, thought for a moment before slapping a hoof against her forehead with a laugh. “Oh, duh! Everything caught fire!”
“Yes!” Pinkie chirped happily, “Exactly! And fire isn’t one of those things you wanna see when you’re baking! Fire is bad. Pretty, but bad. Do you understand?”
The twins nodded contritely a moment before they were swept into a tight hug, and Pinkie continued.
“Hey, turn those frowns upside down! You only started two fires today! That’s a whole six less than yesterday! It’s three more than the day before that, but still – I’m proud of you guys! And the cookies turned out perfect!”
The twins exchanged glances, and Pumpkin spoke again. “Pinks, you know we left those in the oven, right? The one that was on fire?”
Pinkie bobbed her head contentedly. “I know! You’re lucky I remembered to save ‘em, or they’d have been gone forever – and a good baker never leaves a crumb behind! Now, repeat after me: I am a baker, and today I have done myself proud!”
As the twins recited the oath under the falling rain, Pinkie Pie was grinning.
The Prompt: Ponies: The Next Generation
Why does this make so much sense!?
I think this is one of my favourites.
Yes. Thumbs up. I'll have seconds, please.
I AM A BAKER, AND TODAY I HAVE DONE MYSELF PROUD!
I love this so freakin' hard. I love how completely unflappable Pinkie Pie is, I love the Cake twins being all hangdog, I love the town reaching a point where it's not even fazed when the bakery catches on fire.
I have no idea if this is what you intended, but my head canon for this story is that Mr. and Mrs. Cake have both passed away and left guardianship of their kiddos with Pinkie. Pinkie takes this responsibility very, very seriously; loves them both very, very much; and is raising them to the best of her ability. It's hard for all of them--the twins still miss their parents dearly, as does Pinkie, and money is tight--but the three of them are completely devoted to one another and are muddling their way through.
But they only started two... ? ?! !
1309539 That is, in fact, precisely what I intended - at least the first part, as I didn't really consider the financial stuff. I didn't include it because it kinda clashed with the sheer silly of the piece, but Pinkie is most definitely their guardian.
And I'm glad you like it. It was absurdly fun to write. (Also, you have no idea how much seeing the oath there made me grin. )
1307073 I think it's one of mine, too.
1308322 Hehe. Perhaps some day.
1306969 Because Pinkie Pie.
1309583 And the other day they started negative one. It's a baker thing.
1310211 Does that mean they prevented a fire? Or did they put out someone else's fire and not start any of their own? I'm confused here.
1420391 It could mean any of those, yes - if I had to pick one, I'd say that Pinkie was just arbitrarily making up the numbers on the spot without checking to see if they added up.