A writer, a pony, not an avid reader, someone who prefers being alone but also a friend.
Somepony crashes into Applejack's barn in the middle of the night. Applejack becomes horrified once she sees who it is and does everything she can to teach that pony a lesson they will never forget and make it stick with them for the rest of their life.
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Hmm interesting...
Good job dude
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Thank you! This is my first-ever story and I am happy you thought of that when commenting!
I'm glad I found this story, but I can't help but wonder why it came up when I searched the word 'rabies'...
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Hello, NewKerbalEmpire! Thank you so much for expressing gratitude for finding my story! It helps motivate myself on going forward. Hardly anyone looks at my stuff so I really take it seriously when someone takes the time to comment!
As for your latter part of your statement, I have no clue! Heh.
I just loved this story. It was paced well, and you captured Applejack's true character to a T.
Your writing is very clean, if that makes any sense. It's very comfortable to read for a long time.
Keep up the wonderful work!
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Thank you! I tend to take my time writing the story, have no rush to make a plot or whatever. Also, thank you for praising me on my characterisation of Applejack! I'd be ashamed to call myself a fan of her if I didn't have her personality done right! Ha, ha.
My writing is clean? Thank you so much! I proofread this to myself a few times before publishing it.
Wow, what a story. This is definitely show material. I defenitly imagine this happening
. The personalities were also spot on! I felt a connection between the characters when they spoke to each other. And the flow of the story was great by switching from AJ and RD to the others made the story even more entertaining. Great work my friend 
. And I plan to read your other stories in the near future 
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1) Describe the connection and what characters it was between. I'd love to know!
2) Really? You'd like to read more of my stuff? That is just great!
7076106 I've had many moments where I've been in RD's, um.... Hooves? And I've always had friends and family like applejack to tell me why I shouldn't feel down and why I should care about myself. So ya, I felt this story really connect to me in that way