I'm a knight. Covered in soot. I'm not very good at this job.
King Sombra has been trapped in this cave for hundreds of years. He's been counting the days for nearly as long as he can remember.
In that time, he has been remembered only as a tyrant, a dictator... before he vanished from the face of history.
Soon, he plans to show the world just how wrong they were.
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Written for the F*** This Prompt 9 contest.
... I have no idea what I'm doing.
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Hmmm. Certainly interesting...
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You don't have to sugarcoat it; I know it's bad. x] My only issue is I'm not sure exactly what makes it bad.
This was just an effort to write more and improve by doing. Thank you for reading it!
No, it is interesting. There's a rough of an idea here. If it weren't for the competition and how late you entered, I'd expect this to evolve into a great piece.