I'm a Pegasister new to writing pony fiction, and I can't wait to start writing! My favorite ponies are Twilight, Luna, the Great and Powerful Trixie, Rarity and Derpy.
In a desperate struggle to find a new job to help put food on the table, Derpy ends up working for an advertising agency where she must write songs for commercials. It all seemed to good to be true until Derpy discovered how talented she truly was at songwriting.
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Really funny, but the inside messages could be offensive to some people... This has great potential to be featured, but if enough people are offended by the messages it might not be. Anyway, maybe you should remove the thing about the jobs. Still a great story
That was adorable!
Rainbow Dash has no idea what she's in for. And it will be hilarious.
Good
Good references
I liked it, but like DaughterScrewball said you should remove the meta bits, it really detracts from the story. I really liked the nonsense songs.
Are the ditties supposed to have the tunes of real songs?
...You really don't get how difficult the employment market can be, do you? And fuck you for insulting Burger King jobs. Work is work, people have to do whatever they can to get by, and there's no shame in fast food work.
I...people like this? Like...there are plenty of plot holes and syntax errors in this, and the concept is decent enough, but...I just don't get it.
Comedy tag, why have you failed me so horribly?
Cracked a smile at Rainbow Dash getting off-screen comeuppance though.
Funny, but the cracks on jobs and employment are actually pretty offensive. Trust me, I have friends who are unemployed, they laughed at this too, but you obviously don't know what they've gone through. Employers these days are super picky and tight, even franchises. You're either the absolute perfect fit, know their job inside and out before you even start, or you're still looking.
Humor alone cannot forgive your ignorance on this issue, thumbs down I'm afraid.