• Member Since 18th Mar, 2012
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Night Princess


I'm a Pegasister new to writing pony fiction, and I can't wait to start writing! My favorite ponies are Twilight, Luna, the Great and Powerful Trixie, Rarity and Derpy.

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The fillies Celestia and Luna proclaim war on each other, and prepare for a battle of stuffed animals, plastic toys and their over active imaginations.

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LET THE HEART ATTACKS COMMENCE!!!

~hnng

This was really cute, but I'm not feeling any-HNNNNG!
Oh, there it is.

Admittedly, that was adorable. Could've used a bit of work on phrasing and over-all flow, but at the same time it kind of adds to the childishness of the entire story so, all things considered, excellent work :pinkiehappy:

I want an army of TEDDYs :pinkiehappy:

Well done. :moustache:

That was incredibly adorable! :rainbowkiss: Does anybody have a spare defibrillator, by any chance?

Well, that was definitely one of the most adorable things I've ever read

Oh look! That picture is -HHHNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGG

The story is just adorable.

My heart burst from the d'awws

Not sure what killed me first, the heart attack or the diabetes.

Anyway, I think this would fit better under the Slice Of Life category - something you could see happening (before) cannon.

So cute XD
(Did they have Pizza back then?)

D'aww, so cute. And in this case, Luna wins! Also...


The bears jump into the air at once, as if they are all one bear.

You should change the last bear to something... less repetitive. All one being, body, creature. Whatever floats your boat. Otherwise, excellent :scootangel:

D'AAAWWWWWWWWWwWWWW:raritycry:
Why is it over already??

Somehow, this was even more adorable while listening to the Duke Nukem Forever version of Grabbag. :derpytongue2:

The fun has been adorabled!

DAWWWWW......HHHNNNNNNNGGG too....much....ADORABLENESS!!!!!!:rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::yay::twilightsmile::pinkiesmile:

and now i have diabetes.

Sooooooo cute:twilightsmile:!
One thing baron=title of nobility. Barren=nothing there

HNNNNNGGG. DIABEETUS. SO. F**KING. CUTE. *spasms and foams at the mouth, falling to the ground*

:rainbowderp:

I was listening to Rainbow Factory the song and watching this at the same time... Is it wierd that I found this that much more adorable?
:ajsmug: :yay: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowlaugh: :raritywink: :twilightsmile:
oh yeah, and btw....
:trollestia:
celestia approves (luna would too, except she's asleep)
{like my profile pic?}

and Luna takes out the majority of the phoenix army with one boulder-

"HUZZAH! HOW MANY POINTS DO I RECEIVE!?"

The adorableness has been doubled!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

De-fib please?:pinkiesick:

The cutness! I-I can't handle it! I-it's...it's too mu-*explodes*

I'm smiling like an idiot at my computer screen due to the cuteness of the story...I can't stop. :pinkiehappy:

Moonshire... now my favorite Fictional place.

D'aaawwwww!!

OMG THAT'S SO F*CKIN CUTE I COULD DIE!!!:trollestia::pinkiehappy::heart::twilightsmile:

DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!
That was probably the best story I've ever heard in my entire life!!!!

811278 Yes, I love InuYasha! Shippo is my favorite.

I realise this has been said before, but-
D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW:rainbowkiss:

Mistake:
"Half of the army held up lighted torches, sparking and crackling."

Well that was adorable.

Now if you'll excuse me, HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG! :raritydespair:

D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! My heart exploded...twice.:rainbowkiss: Just so cute!

My heart exploded 2,000 times.:twilightsheepish:

is there a source for the pic?

Diabeetus. You have given them to me. can I live in Moonshire? please?:applecry:

I'm having a baby with my wife in about seven or eight months, and I have the strangest feeling that if they are twins, they are going to do exactly what is said in this story...

Anywhore, this is one of my favorite stories ever. Also, that cover photo is the most adorable picture I've ever seen.

THE ADORABLENESS HAS BEEN DOUBLED!!!:heart::heart::heart:

LOVE IT!!!


~And that's how Equestria was made!

THE ADORABLENESS IS OVER 9,000!!!!!! :flutterrage:


Cute story, you deserve a free moustache :moustache:

What a great story! I absolutely loved it, so much cuteness I think you may have given me diabetes. Totally worth it! :heart::heart:

I died of cuteness....i loved it!

I reviewed your story tonight you can find it here

I'd read the whole thing and I was like, "What the hell?"

Anyway, good job on this story.

I was the creepy guy watching thought the window with a can of lube...
:trollestia:
lol.

As soon as I saw the fimfic name I shouted "this is Sparta!" And woke up my baby brother :-P

Too... adorable... GAH!!! *Explodes*

I AGREE!!! TOO MUCH CUTENESS!!!!!!!

I take it this story was inspired by this

epic_space_war_of_destiny_by_drawponies

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