Twilight woke up to a beautiful, sunny day, and thought that today would be a wonderful day, maybe even the perfect day she longs for, without any threats to Ponyville or Canterlot for once.
Unfortunately, an outside force has a plan that utterly shatters all ideals of a perfect day for Twilight and a friend of hers, and there are signs of a plan that may just shatter the tranquil peace that Equestria has been enjoying for thousands of years. What will become of Twilight and Rainbow Dash as they go on a journey to warn Princess Celestia about Luna?
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Backwards-Forwards format style of writing, where the ending is at the beginning and the beginning is at the end, it'll get confusing at first, but if needed, just start from the bottom of the story and work your way up, although it kills the surprise at the end.
You'll notice as you read through the story that the characters never actually say any lines of dialogue, even though it's implied throughout the story. The intention behind this is to have the reader (You) think about what the characters would say in the scenes; thus giving the story a perspective that will almost certainly differ from mine and any others
Picture is 'Twilight Acension.', by ponyrake of deviantart.
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MAJOR TROLLESTIA!
Wow, twist beginning? That's a first.
The backwards structure kept throwing me off, and I occasionally had to re-read a section forwards, but that's just me being illiterate. Aside from that, 5 stars.
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Well, actually, I've made made another story that has this kind of format called The End of the beginning, and it was my test run fic before I made this one, you should check it out if you really enjoyed this!