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Warpony


I...am a Brony. I...am proud. I...am a writer. And I...well I try to be as friendly as possible to all those I meet really. So yeah, I have a Skype and a DeviantArt. Skype: ragedanny88

Comments ( 20 )

1. Nice RvB reference.
2. I can't wait to see where this goes
3. Is it set during the first discord problem or the second?

Info-dump in the first few paragraphs turns a lot of people off.

I recommend you start by having the character do something, then introducing his backstory bit by bit.

Yeah, your right. Damn it it already started out bad.

708706 This is set before the mane six and all that. This is Discord #1 baby

Meh your other story is better but interesting context.

HA. I see what you did there. well played.

"You ever wonder why we're here?"

Pax made a noise that sounded like he was inhaling. "That is one of life's great mysterious isn't it? Why are we here? I mean, are we the product of some cosmic coincidence or is there really a God watching everything? You know, with a plan for us and stuff. I don't know man, but it keeps me up at night."

"..."

"..."

"What? I mean, why are we out here in this tree?" Apex looked at his friend confused.

Pax felt slightly embarrassed. "Oh um... yeah."

"What was all that stuff about God?"

"Uhh, hm? Nothing."

Apex slowly turned away from his friend. He then quickly turned back and asked, "Do you want to talk about it?"

Pax said in an embarrassed peep. "No."

"Are you sure?"

"Yeah."

"What are they doing?"

"What?" He puts down the bottle.

"I said, what are they doing now?" This time with more boredom.

"God damn, I am getting sick and tired of answering that question."

"You can see, while I can't see shit. Don't bitch at me because I'm not going to just sit up here and play with my-"

"Okay look, they are just standing there. Talking okay, that all they are doing. That's all they are ever doing, that's what they were doing last week, that's what they were doing five minutes ago. So five minutes from now when you ask me again, I'm going to say, they're talking."

"Well what are they talking about?"

"I fucking hate you.

719447 Yes, you under stand. Welcome to the brotherhood, we will contact you when needed.:trixieshiftleft:

Be ready.:trixieshiftright:

well fuck.
but why am I not surprised it didnt work?

748972 It was never suppose to? The whole reason for this story?

748979ding ding ding
you win sir
I was being dumb anyways
and for your work with both this and 'Dont step on a rune'
I give this song to you!

749010 Thank you kind Sir. I can only give you a cookie.

749053*is ferouciously eating a jammy dodger*

as you wish. rainbow out.:moustache:

XD was replying to your reply to my comment above.^^^^^^^^^ ten posts above this one to be precise

762388 Oh, well then....carry on.

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