During the royal wedding fight, all of the changelings got blasted away. All but one. The mix, or couple incidents allows him to get a free will and no longer have to listen to what his queen ordered him to do. What will he do with his new life ?
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I am excited to read this due to the fact that the premise for this story is amazing and makes me very happy. A changeling mare-do-well is genius!
I might read it later, but please never ever again do a wall of text like that. Use spaces in dialogues.
ooooh, looking good so far, tracking and most likely faving at some point, oh, but thumbs up for sure!
*gets finished reading the description* Proceed... *starts actually reading*
*finishes reading*
Not bad, and I guess from the The End comment at the end it's actually a completed story. I'm a little sad it was such a short read, but it was definitely nice! Unless you're planning on continuing it though I couldn't really call it dark... I mean, it'd be pretty awesome of Mare-Do-Well was discovered to be a changeling and became "The Hero They Deserve" like batman, but still pretty nice.
Anyway~, have some corrections to some of your grammar and spelling errors.
He'd figure something out.
Most of them were four or five storied, and there were ponies everywhere.
“What do you want, you old hag. Want me to kick your flank too ?”
Also, I'd consider going back and indenting your paragraphs.
He's the hero that Fillydelphia deserves. A silent guardian, a watchful protector... The Changeling Knight.
Mfw the Changeling was actually disguised as mare do well
this was a great read none the less. excellent work! 
lol the mane six must be wondering who the fuck is he
Wow thanks for the comments and thumbsies :D I just woke up and now my face is smiling like never before :D
To answer some of your comments:
Sorry for my grammar, I really suck at it and my vocabulary is limited but I try my best and Ill try to change it a little so its more readable
Yeah I was going for the silent knight of *insert name of town* :D ended up with Fillydelphia because Ill be making another fic with a similar plot that will be longer.
This story is in the same universe as my other fics I have (the connection, noones little dragon) and its before the events of the conenction but the ending is after its start so the mare six dont know about it :D go read it , youll know
Also there wont be a continuation on this, mostly because the other "project" I have but the changeling mare do well will appear again so dont worry :D
I like this Marek, very good premise but i think you really should have made it last longer, the pace was a bit too fast and this story really could have been continued
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No continuation!?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
I wanted to see him maybe impersonate more "weaklings" and then beat the bad guys leaving the confused and unnerved....
second though if you don't do that I might see what I can do, won't be mare-do-well though, I would make things a bit.... more interesting
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no direct continuation but he will appear again in my other fanfic for one chapter where ill show a bit more of him.
but if you, or someone else wants, you can write the stories of his crimefighting as long as you say where the idea came from :D
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okay, and I think my crime fighting changeling will be rather different and a rather interesting back story as well as throwing in an explanation of where luna was and who she was with during the invasion.
That all being said I will say where this story was seeded from should I ever get around to making it, this will be the second potential story seeded as a direct result of something off this site.
over here you can find another such instance I hope to fulfill someday.
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You really should do a new chapter for this story...
Its also still tagged "incomplete" :)
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Fixed XD sry. And as I said the Mare-do-changeling will appear again :D
I did not like this story. I like reading stories about changelings, but the story took a hard left turn into that changeling being Mare-do-well, which I cannot respect because that character is from, by a nearly universal account, the worse episode from season two. Then as soon as this changeling decides to be the pointlessly masked character, there is a short description of what will happen in the next couple of months/years, but the story ends.
I guess what I'm trying to say is that this story more so resembles a short story, but in the uninteresting places it is written like a novel. I'm sorry to say that because yes, you do describe the common conception that could be called "changelings are borg", but because I already know that, I don't see any interesting such as character development, except for the deus ex machina of that changeling suddenly growing a soul to want to defend the innocent, which isn't wrong, but it's hard to believe considering he thought nothing about the fact that he was part of an invading force not but a few sentences ago.
You probably should have a Changeling tag and a Mare Do Well tag. To make this easier to find on the browser engine.