Twilight Zone

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#1 · Dec 12th, 2011 · · ·

Dude. This is HOT

Theorangefox

Theorangefox #2 · Dec 12th, 2011 · · ·

62799 Thanks so much! You should read my other stuff! :D

#3 · Dec 13th, 2011 · · ·

It was really good and I was enjoying it immensely until I read the line "Firestorm found himself enjoying it more even though it felt weird" (liek a crunchy bag of paoto chips were thron into a chianlink fence and i dont konw were htis metafore goseign aynmroe)
Then I just started getting flashbacks of reading "spiderses" and I had to stop. (its not your fault, just my brain is being faulty.)
Really, the lines started synching and I started getting grossed out, turned on and facinated simulntainiously!
It's unfortunate really, just now, as I can't read anymore of this story without it going very bad.

Ok, I continued reading after doing some strenuos thought cleansing actions (partially involving fisting and a toothbrush.. you really dont want to know...)
and barring my pain it was great! (Though I am still confused about the anatomy and have let it rest with: Horses when it is possible, anthro when it fits and baman-piderman style bonelessness when nothing else would make sense.)

Anyway a good read (this is #3) and Ill read your other works later.

Theorangefox

Theorangefox #4 · Dec 13th, 2011 · · ·

64741 Thank you so much! Sorry if it messed you up a little

Darkus-Moon-Shine

Darkus-Moon-Shine #5 · Jan 17th, 2012 · · ·

MY celestia, saw what you did their in the end, well i say another good story

and i know how firestorm felt beying in the friend zone. to tell you the truth i tried to be more than a friend with 4 mare's 3 were not intersted and the other 1 just want to be friend's

#6 · Jan 26th, 2012 · · ·

A lot of this is a bit confusing, At times you reference Ponies and at others you reference Humans, But overall a good read

Elkhorse

Elkhorse #7 · Mar 9th, 2012 · · ·

Ah, I see. You made them with an anthropology to be similar to humans but had them use the same terminology as ponies. While Twilight seemed to be a massive desperate slut as a gleaming contrast to her normally reserved self, I enjoyed it for the clop, not plot.

Theorangefox