When asked if Marble wanted to sing with the Ponytones, she replied with a cautious, "Mhm..."
Now she wishes she could take it back.
Just a dork who writes when given prompts
When asked if Marble wanted to sing with the Ponytones, she replied with a cautious, "Mhm..."
Now she wishes she could take it back.
D'aww, I liked this story!
And this is your first one, too? Awesome! Have an upvote!!!
Dis was cute.
And for the Ponytones' next song with Marble Pie as their newest member:
I loved it! Keep up the great work! Upvote and favorite from me!
You're off to a good start on the site. I wish more writers would follow your example and make their very first ponyfic be something along the lines of what we might see in the show itself. There are a couple of areas where I could nitpick, but they're fairly minor. (Feel free to PM me if you're wondering, though.)
Gonna have to add this to some groups so more people can see it, I think.
That was really sweet. All warm fuzzies everywhere!
This made my day! You are quite the talented writer with a lot of potential. Keep up with great work; you deserve the success.
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Thank you!
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Thank you very much!~
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Thank you! That means a lot to me!~
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Thank you!
Now pair her with Sweetie Belle and see what happens.