My name is Taylor, I was once human, until a navy blue alicorn came up to me and took me to Equestria, Cause I was good with robotics
This is my first, I think it's called a one shot. So, feedback is welcome, both good and bad, and what I can change/fix
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Whats with the comedy tag its not even funny... Its Kinda tragic if you ask me..
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I placed it in for the parts that talked ponies acting crazy
6575248 uhh are you sure? Those instances was not even funny in any stretch of the imagination...
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Well kind funny for me.
I kinda don't see how it's tragic
Well its not tragic to your character but its tragic to the ponies and its kinda odd that your character did not question his morality regarding the creation of those mind control bugs... But just to be sure according to your story he agreed because he has nothing better to do so he decided to help overthrow the princess's and rule the word??
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He's kinda bored
I'll add more thought to right before the ending
6575480 well...i guess its your story but i still think you should add a tragedy tag in there..
So the story ever going to continue
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I honestly never thought about a sequel.
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The way the story ended It felt like it was on the beginning but more problems would arise from them being in power