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A 1500 year old story is revealed about a man that walks home, in the rain, and comes home to four little surprises. It's chaos for him, not knowing anything.

First story I've done in the past. So feedback and suggestion is appreciated, and will be helpful.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 7 )

I don’t have any more bed, I go buy some when I get the money

Is the bad grammar intentional?

Do you have an editor? Pre reader? I like the story ideal but its a little rough.

Dun dun DUUUUUNNN!

Awww, nothing like a classic kid.

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