A 1500 year old story is revealed about a man that walks home, in the rain, and comes home to four little surprises. It's chaos for him, not knowing anything.
First story I've done in the past. So feedback and suggestion is appreciated, and will be helpful.
Is the bad grammar intentional?
6455764 no
Do you have an editor? Pre reader? I like the story ideal but its a little rough.
6460846 no
6460861 They help a lot!!
Dun dun DUUUUUNNN!
Awww, nothing like a classic kid.