"Though my body is gone, I will never Die"
I am King Sombra, master of the dark arts. I have ruled for years in a country I made my own. Reined with an iron hoof and made all subservient to my will. I have fought the two most powerful alicorns in Equestria single-handed and though I lost, it took them to rely on the elements of pure magic before they could even gain an upper hand on me. I have fought against a dragon and the true princess of the Crystal Empire and lost, but they would have never defeated me had the dragon not been there. I've lost everything. My body, my honor, and my power. But I will never
He said while he made them do tremendous amount of physical labour, letting them suffer and feel pain by the amount of work he pushed em' through... Yep. Totally misunderstood. And of course there is no crime when everypony is already chained up.
Really? You made the world your enemy... while you wanted to keep 'your' 'servants' away from suffering and pain? And then complaining about that you're 'misunderstood'. And, apparently, that's the ONLY way to become a 'great king'.
Sombra... you really need to re-think your past, because it doesn't add up.
"No! The flying earth pony called 'Trotter Pan'!"
Interesting beginning, a few spelling errors, ( Flawed logic is optional, probably just the way he thinks/sees it.) but further a good start.
The way he's talking is similar to an episode of the simpsons.
Skinner: Am I out of touch. No! it's the children who are wrong!