Queen Chrysalis is the leader of the changelings, who feed on the love that other ponies feel for them. We have only seen her for two episodes in season 2 and has not yet returned to the show. Chrysalis is a character with little to no background about her, not even Celestia says anything about past relations. With the show not satisfying the need to give some backing to Chrysalis, we created our own backstory about her. So let's read on about the tale of corruption from a filly unicorn to the Queen of the changelings.
Chapters (3)
God damit! Why Night Dancer she was such a badass! I hope you out gore as a title thing.
I think the main issue here is indentation. If you were to make the paragraphs more apparent (perhaps even used the TAB key) that would really help your story's popularity. Otherwise it just looks like a massive column of text, which in turn makes it difficult for others to read.
Just some feedback.