"When I became a man I put away childish things, including the fear of childishness and the desire to be very grown up.” - C.S. Lewis
Three years ago Prince Shining made a deal with the devil to save the life of his love. Now, as the time comes to pay up, Shining heads into the Frozen North, his only companion a mare named North Star, as he hopes to alter the deal. Regardless of the cost.
Entry for the Rage Reviews F*CK THIS PROMPT 6 contest. Prompt: "Equestria is getting a new Alicorn Princess."
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What a twist, though the lack of character tags should have given some idea.
6518136 Yeah. I debated for a while as to whether adding proper character tags or just leaving them entirely blank would make the twist more obvious.
Awesome. A thoroughly enjoyable adventure, with a clever twist. Well done
I thought this was pretty awesome. At first, I was confused by the lack of character tags, but it all made sense towards the end.
Woah, I thought it was Shining Armor and Princess Cadance, but wow, that was a good plot twist right there!
