Well, I'm 17 (for now) and I absolutely love writing. Writing is one of my favourite pastimes so I'm glad that I came here!
After seventy years building up one of the biggest companies in Equestria, Applebloom finally decides to go home. As she rides the train back to Ponyville, she revisits some of the moments in her life that have led her to this point and thinks about what could have been different.
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Love it so far, can't wait for what happens next
Please continue!
I ABSOLUTELY
THIS STORY BUT IT IS KIND OF SAD TOO!
Please, go on.
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Glad to see there are a few people who like my story!
I'll try and update as frequently as I can, so the next chapter should be up within a few days
O.o... This must've just popped up as I was reading.
Good story so far.
845966 Thanks!
846138
I'm a sucker for Apple Bloom...
You're welcome!
I was reading and as soon as I finished Chapter 7 Chapter 9 appeared... Didn't even notice 'til I read Ch. 8 and flipped over!
Please continue! Still a really go story!
Scribble Dibble is best pony
883716 I thought you'd approve. How does it feel to know that your OC got married to a billionaire model/actress?
883978 Sounds like a prediction to me
Apple Bloom!
You rock!
And the story approaches its close. By the way, you had a chance to include a drunk country band on the train at many points
You'd be writing from experience.
Sorry about the crappy drawing quality, but that's what you get when you hand draw it.
902006 I didn't expect the drawing or the music, but it's much better than I remember you describing to me. Good luck submitting this to EQD!
902672 thankyou kindly
This fic deserves more views and ratings.
This fic deserves more views and ratings.
902784 Awww, thankyou
This was great! I loved the whole story!
Tears were shed, I need to man up though...
Who am I kidding?
910042 thanks, I was hoping that ending would get at least afew people crying
Just found this fic, and have to say well done. It is pretty well-written with not errors that popped out to me, or broke the feel of the story (if there were any. I'm not very good with that). But the concept, and the narration of Applebloom was amazing. It never got old and I never got sick of reading it. The ending, I am literally choking up with emotion. Even after her living her life, making her mistakes, she has gained back hope that she can start over in another life.
My only advice for the story is to get rid of the link in the middle of the last chapter. I kinda breaks you out of the story and makes you realize 'this is a fic, and not real.' The music is nice, but I think you wrote it well enough that you don't need it.
This is a very touching fic, and I am glad to have read it. Thank you for writing it.