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Sir Hat


Back for one last rodeo

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Some ponies find love, and to those few it means everything. Losing it can drive them to horrifying lengths to take it back, lengths some ponies would call insane. For one pony however, no cost is too great, no challange too daunting, and not taboo restricting.

In the loving memory of someone dead.

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Comments ( 25 )

Is this part of the Red Eyed Man?

Wow. Nicely done.

Unless you are going for something, it is spelled dependence

Dark but I like it:pinkiehappy:

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Like I said...was on a few painkillers.:twilightblush:

days or months or maybe even days

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Meant years...I'll fix that after work.:twilightblush:

Wow, an addiction to love someone, even though they hate their guts for replacing them. That's mess up, in a sorta strange way of a relationship, no dislike because of it being different. But no like for the strange relationship, not saying it's bad, but to me it's just...strange.

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Incase you couldn't tell...tis a changeling taking Fancy's face. Fleur loves Fancy, and couldn't let him go, thus hides a changeling to keep herself sane.

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The green glow? The cut healing after she hugs him? I thought I made it pretty clear....:trixieshiftleft:

4683386 Actually it slowly did, lack of sleep and lack of coffee are major problems to a writer, especially when one is editing or working on a chapter.

4683432 But you weren't editing, or writing...you were reading.:rainbowhuh:

4683487 I multi-task at times. Right now I'm somewhat changing things in one of the stories in google docs. So far, things are decent. Anyway I don't want to trouble you with my problems, so lets continue on with life. (This sentence isn't meant to be rude, only to show how tired he is.) Auto-explainer, tells people what I'm trying to say without showing it being rude or a troll.

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Dude...what?:rainbowhuh:
I uh...sure...go not make sense somewhere else please...:pinkiesick:

4682266 oh, I haven't read it yet.

Dark, perhaps, but kind of sad, too, at the end. And done well, too, considering I had a few tears at the last line.

Whoa. This is twisted. At first, I thought Fancy Pants was a zombie. Honestly, it might have been better for Fleur if he were.

In any case, a very powerful piece. Thank you for it.

:rainbowderp:Um.....wow, just....Wow.

... Gods, i don't know what to say...

idk what to think
thats it ima go cry now

Read this just because it was a prequel to the new vinyl story. Have to say that, although this is not my genre, I enjoyed the way you wrote this.

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