As Twilight goes deeper into darkness, she is lost in her own descent. Going deeper into the Royal Castle which was taken over by the Shadow of Chaos. Betrayed by her own teacher, Princess Celestia, she must find her way toward the heart of the castle. Her friends are no where to be found. Finding a note that only tells her that the friends she knew, may be changed forever. Everyone she loves is in grave danger. All because of her. She must fix this large error that she has created. The shadow she has unleashed. Losing her memory she will go through the descent into darkness... (Story line is based on actual game)
Chapters (5)
That picture made my soul hurt....
I look forward to more chapters
as i both love amnesia (and possibly dread it too)
Gonna read later. Looks VERY promising...
Reading later. Have some creepy ponies to go along with that!
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One little nitpick: ”Feeling my hands suddenly tremble...”. Shouldn't it be hooves?
Other than that, looking forward to the next chapter
Formatting, like spaces between paragraphs would be nice. But I liked it. Horror is one of my favorite genres, and I'm interested to see how this goes.
I read it. It's amazing :D Tracked.
Through The Infinitive Halls Of Death - Candlemass
I need to play Amnesi--- NEVER ITS TOO SCARY AND HARD!
Not bad. Admittedly it seems a tad clunky in places, but keep up the good work. I've got my eye on this one
it reads alot like amnesia plays very well done
Im looking forward to more chapters, and its so interesting. i REALLY cant wait till the next chapter
Because of this fic, you made me watch PewDiePie's Amnesia walkthrough video series (34 videos at 11-18 minutes each). I must say that you've captured the story line quite well.
So, is Twilight gonna kill Celestia or is she not. And was that stallionTwilight's brother?
I like the story, but I've seen this way too often is many fics.
Then is a comparison of time. Than is a comparison between objects, characteristics, etc.
I was scrolling through my favorites not expecting anything new. You gave me a scare at 2:38 am. You evil genius...
Never play Amnesia at night? But that is when it's the most fun to play.
I love this story!
Now I just need to anxiously wait for the next chapter. 
That picture has scarred me for life. I will never sleep again.
Damn I'm so lazy, the chapter should be up sooner or later. I already have the draft done. Just don't want to revise it
sorry!
Update due this week, updating cover picture